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A Speckle in the Universe
In hallucination avenue
Speeding through my mind
A speckle lost in the universe
I see the humid reflections that lie
Shadows of forgotten dreams
Run from searching eyes
My path is lost in the abyss
Amidst the starry skies
Speeding through my mind
A speckle lost in the universe
I see the humid reflections that lie
Shadows of forgotten dreams
Run from searching eyes
My path is lost in the abyss
Amidst the starry skies
Published 25th Sep 2011
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Anonymous
26th Sep 2011 6:26am
I love the short, punch in this,
Its just perfect.
Really nice work here.
Its just perfect.
Really nice work here.
13th Oct 2011 8:59am
As with the follow up poem "An Abyss of Forgotten Dreams", you write volumes when searching deep inside yourself. Though brief, it exposes your soul in the blink of an eye... JJ
I agree with Ali P like a small packet of cigarettes your good and it works but I want a packet more.
