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Arroused
...he could sense my love on fire
even before he inhales the smoke,
intimacy ablaze trying to suppress intensity
never to inflame
but to keep it burning,
keep him yearning
while observing the sweltering bit
of sparkle adopting his carbonated space
lust grabs hold
the need unfold
and all that is needed
is a french kiss to steal my breath,
the only time I’m content with no air.
i can feel his stare,
he can smell my need
succumbing to every single dirty deed,
choking on his girth
trying to suck out his seeds....of life,
he gives me life
every,
single,
time...our bodies commune in its organic forms,
and gentle moans slip through parted lips
seducing an atmosphere unrehearsed for our cries
i cry sweet n salty tears that decorate my inner thighs,
mesmerized by the way he dance between my limbs
he's owning his rhythm while my body heaves in hymn,
tasting each other’s wet fingertips with
the scent of truth still cloaked securely,
knitted to acme on wrinkled satin sheets
soaked with third and fourth comings….
Rain
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Re. Arroused
26th Dec 2017 7:10pm
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5th Jan 2018 00:56am
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26th Dec 2017 7:37pm
A sip of your sweet poetic rain is just as delicious the second time around dear Tara!
A thirst quenching cloud burst of passion just in time for the new year!
JJ
A thirst quenching cloud burst of passion just in time for the new year!
JJ
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Your comments never cease to amaze me, jj! Always delivered poetically! Thanks babe! 😘
Re. Arroused
26th Dec 2017 7:53pm
Mmmmmmm...Yup love it still!!!
Feels even hotter the second time around!! :)
Feels even hotter the second time around!! :)
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5th Jan 2018 1:01am
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26th Dec 2017 8:24pm
well, i just about slipped off my seat
ahem
lawd this is mighty fine erotica, rainy lady...
... pure class & still sinful & sexy AF
*
i bow to the Queen of erotica
xo
ahem
lawd this is mighty fine erotica, rainy lady...
... pure class & still sinful & sexy AF
*
i bow to the Queen of erotica
xo
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5th Jan 2018 1:06am
You beautiful, talentive, princess- you! 😘 Love when you pirouette on my page.. Thank you doll!⚘
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26th Dec 2017 10:12pm
......you already know my feelings about this ink. Some archival images never seem to fade away 😍 😋😌
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5th Jan 2018 1:11am
I don't recall you commenting on this particular ink back then Archie, so I'm not sure of your feelings but I'm pleased you took her ass home with you!😁 Thanks hon!
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27th Dec 2017 5:16am
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5th Jan 2018 1:13am
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27th Dec 2017 6:24am
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5th Jan 2018 1:20am
Ha! That ain't all you want to...um..eat! Lol... Thanks babe! Thrilled you're snatching her!😘
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2017 4:45pm
Breathtaking sensuality wrapped in every word. Those breathless kisses are tantalizing beyond words.
Willow
Willow
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5th Jan 2018 1:23am
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27th Dec 2017 6:54pm
I find that a poem is more erotic without the need for using vulgar language. You've managed to portray the intimacy and raw passion that two human beings have in the act.
Well done!
Well done!
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Thank you for that wonderful reply and for being so observant, Luna! 😍I pride myself on creating sensual erotica and not porn. 😊 Thanks a bunch for keeping her! # Pen love
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Anonymous
28th Dec 2017 4:24pm
'i cry sweet n salty tears that decorate my inner thighs,
mesmerized by the way he dance between my limbs'
mmmhm
'he's owning his rhythm while my body heaves in hymn, '
absolutely love this!!!
mesmerized by the way he dance between my limbs'
mmmhm
'he's owning his rhythm while my body heaves in hymn, '
absolutely love this!!!
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Re: Re. Arroused
5th Jan 2018 1:32am
I'm so stoked that you enjoyed this, Naajir! I feel good!😊 Happy you've listed her! Thank you!😘
Re. Arroused
29th Dec 2017 1:37am
and gentle moans slip through parted lips
seducing an atmosphere unrehearsed for our cries
Intoxicating!!
~Wicked
seducing an atmosphere unrehearsed for our cries
Intoxicating!!
~Wicked
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5th Jan 2018 1:36am
You know I've become smitten with your pen, wicked! So it makes my spirit smile when you take my ink home with you! 😘 Thanks dear!
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29th Dec 2017 2:16am
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5th Jan 2018 1:42am
.... it's a spell, hell, makes me wanna..👅 lol..
Thanks Fat! Appreciate the Shoop love! 😉
Thanks Fat! Appreciate the Shoop love! 😉
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30th Dec 2017 11:39am
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5th Jan 2018 1:44am
Lmao!😂😂 Would love for an erection to be triggered via my ink! 😉 Thanks luv!
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1st Jan 2018 1:40am
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6th Jan 2018 3:44pm
This wordplay is ridiculous!
Amazing imagery too. 🔥, absolute fire, literally
Amazing imagery too. 🔥, absolute fire, literally
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7th Oct 2018 5:16pm
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30th Nov 2019 4:07pm
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13th Feb 2023 7:20pm
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2nd Jul 2023 8:14pm
Hot. Favourite lines particularly:
i cry sweet n salty tears that decorate my inner thighs,
mesmerized by the way he dance between my limbs
he's owning his rhythm while my body heaves in hymn,
tasting each other’s wet fingertips with
the scent of truth still cloaked securely,
knitted to acme on wrinkled satin sheets
soaked with third and fourth comings….
i cry sweet n salty tears that decorate my inner thighs,
mesmerized by the way he dance between my limbs
he's owning his rhythm while my body heaves in hymn,
tasting each other’s wet fingertips with
the scent of truth still cloaked securely,
knitted to acme on wrinkled satin sheets
soaked with third and fourth comings….
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