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hats off to da Devil... u try'd... still here cause Daddy loves me..
Mornin Sunshine!
all due apologies
fa not speakin to u as of late..
ur boy has rightfully been placed in timeout
due to lude and dishonest behavior..
its strange being here..
neva had to ride the pine in my life..
hell..
been the coaches favorite since the first time i touched the pigskin..
well im back..
head on straight..
cock'd lock'd and load'd fa wateva is to come..
call'd the Devil out
and he won the first round..
but Daddy aint raised no punk..
-places raw steak ova right eye to keep the swelling down-
Daddys lil Souljah got some work to do...
8^/ wake up world!
all due apologies
fa not speakin to u as of late..
ur boy has rightfully been placed in timeout
due to lude and dishonest behavior..
its strange being here..
neva had to ride the pine in my life..
hell..
been the coaches favorite since the first time i touched the pigskin..
well im back..
head on straight..
cock'd lock'd and load'd fa wateva is to come..
call'd the Devil out
and he won the first round..
but Daddy aint raised no punk..
-places raw steak ova right eye to keep the swelling down-
Daddys lil Souljah got some work to do...
8^/ wake up world!
Published 23rd Sep 2011
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2011 00:41am
The metaphor of the ball game, the sub's bench, the steak on the black eye, all combine to make this exhortation very manfully attractive. There's not too much turning the other cheek with Ol' Red. Bible classes with attitude! Okay, let's get out on the field for the second quarter! Wooooooohoooooooo!
Eh, what game we playin' again?
Don't matter. Love this. R.
Eh, what game we playin' again?
Don't matter. Love this. R.
24th Sep 2011 2:05am
damn ri Tbird.. ur boy Red is peddle to da metal.. Papa made i 'high octane'.. if i were to describe the sport being played.. hmmm.. it'd be Boxing.. tact. patients. training. conditioning. common sense.......... and so many other important techniques must be applied to servive..
though true in football.. any teams can beat another on any given Sunday.. the game of boxing test the individual.. prodding them to dig deep. question themselves. what they beleive. how far a they willing to go. focas on their strength and that which gives them strength.. so on and so on.. which is y i chose to look at life as a dance. music. or boxing.. can also throw football in when dealing with others..
howeva da case.. LETS GET READY TO RUUUUUUUUUUUMBLE!!!!
8^/ RedHotttt....
though true in football.. any teams can beat another on any given Sunday.. the game of boxing test the individual.. prodding them to dig deep. question themselves. what they beleive. how far a they willing to go. focas on their strength and that which gives them strength.. so on and so on.. which is y i chose to look at life as a dance. music. or boxing.. can also throw football in when dealing with others..
howeva da case.. LETS GET READY TO RUUUUUUUUUUUMBLE!!!!
8^/ RedHotttt....
