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The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
Authors Note: This is not my usual Haikus. I am attempting to tell a story from beginning to a hopeful ending in ten haikus
(i) One
Sad eyes, a sad face
Shows the scars so deep inside
Only love can cure
(ii) Two
Not a good tale
But yet surviving strongly
Powerful lady
(iii) Three
Too long a timid
Changes are necessary
A time to stand up
(iv) Four
She’s very like me
Deprived of caring and love
Are we meant to be?
(v) Five
Love truly blossoms
A strong love between equals
Maybe becomes might
(vi) Six
Might becomes will
A beautiful commitment
Pinky promises
(vii) Seven
Cyber hugs are felt
Cyber sex is redundant
Innocent true love
(viii) Eight
Finally they meet
On white heather clad shores
Living and loving
(ix) Nine
Their love grows daily
Days slip into months and years
Still getting closer
(x) Ten
Death must come for one
Sadness but still no regrets
I'll still be waiting
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Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 00:06am
I believe you have succeeded in every quest you choose. This is beautiful and sad at the end. With respect.
Beth
Beth

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Re: Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 11:44pm
Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 00:42am
dearest David
your love Haiku
are truly moving..
so beautiful even in death
you will be there for this one..
sigh so poignant..
love & hugs..
Brenda
your love Haiku
are truly moving..
so beautiful even in death
you will be there for this one..
sigh so poignant..
love & hugs..
Brenda
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Re: Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 11:47pm
thank you sweet Brenda all these lady in the mirror poems
were in tribute to a very special some one - they were heart felt and real
Love and many Hugs
David :-))))
were in tribute to a very special some one - they were heart felt and real
Love and many Hugs
David :-))))
Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 1:31am
These lady in the photograph poems are absolutely beautiful, David. They show your love so pure and true, the deepest heart of you. So many warm, loving hugs for you. :-)

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Re: Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 11:49pm
The lady concerned is as beautiful as the poems I can assure you :-))))
Huge big Hugs :-)))))
Huge big Hugs :-)))))
Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 3:36am
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15th Dec 2017 11:50pm
Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 4:38am
Lovely thoughts here David.
I truly hope #9 becomes 9a, 9b, 9c, etc. etc. etc.............. long before #10 arrives.
Warm wishes for you both.
I truly hope #9 becomes 9a, 9b, 9c, etc. etc. etc.............. long before #10 arrives.
Warm wishes for you both.
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Re: Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 11:52pm
I will do my damnedest to make sure it does :-))))
thank you so very much really appreciated by both of us
:-))))))))))))))))))
thank you so very much really appreciated by both of us
:-))))))))))))))))))
Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 7:44pm
Wow super cool love haikus, a fine bunch of them. ESP liked the heather one. Kudos for the effort.
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i am a newbie here, u may read my poems but pls review only my latest poem .
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Re: Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
15th Dec 2017 11:54pm
Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
These haiku's are deeply heartwarming David- not only for the story they tell but also because of your ever-inspiring poetic talent! This wasn't your usual cluster of haiku's, but instead you were able to seamlessly capture the flow of each step that has blossomed down this journey of a Dream Come True =)
"Maybe becomes might - Might becomes will" ...just excellent!
May hope and determination bring us ever closer, soon upon the shores of a Scottish Isle <3
The warmest of embraces and all of my Love... Yours Truly =)
"Maybe becomes might - Might becomes will" ...just excellent!
May hope and determination bring us ever closer, soon upon the shores of a Scottish Isle <3
The warmest of embraces and all of my Love... Yours Truly =)
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Re: Re. The Lady In The Photograph (Haikus) 10.0
16th Dec 2017 1:57am
As always you are too kind but that's ok because I love you :-))))
I will be waiting on the white heather clad shores from now until then :-)))))
I love you lady in the photograph and always will <3
I will be waiting on the white heather clad shores from now until then :-)))))
I love you lady in the photograph and always will <3