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Giving Pause(es)
Behind my left ear;
stick & poke glyphs
nerdy
pierced with little
hints
befitting this notion;
A nominal nymph
Knockoff Doc's
with less sole
troll
Footprinting - strolling
fanning your fancies
Maybe these laced-up
paws
could pad
toward your soul
A piece-y pixie
profile
provoking & petite
playfully playacts
Eyes hook;
beaming & scything beyond
single iris looks
& then:
It thaws - withdrawing
like ice flakes
sliding back...down
a straw
Snagging femmes
within swimming - grinning
instants
Tomboy teasing
toying in cadence
blithely
through
Minor moments of emittance
***
For the "Fun With Women" comp. This sort of thing happens in public every so often, I'm not into women, but sometimes my appearance might hint as such. It's endearing and cute when fleeting moments like this happen. I hope nobody reads too much into it, it's only light and flattering 😊
Published 10th Dec 2017
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10th Dec 2017 8:29pm
10th Dec 2017 8:34pm
10th Dec 2017 8:46pm
Truly a fun poem to lighten the mood from the latest news. Enjoyed a lot. :)
John
John
10th Dec 2017 9:39pm
Thank you John! I wrote something ridiculously dark the other day too, and on top of current events, I needed to write this :)
12th Dec 2017 2:00am
12th Dec 2017 3:04am
15th Dec 2017 2:40pm
Delicate,and sensual to taste. like brushing up against abdomens with light touch as to tickle and drive them up the walls.
this write is satisfying to the senses reminding me that even a punctuation could push us over the edge at any moment.
"pierced with little
hints
befitting this notion;
A nominal nymph " - this gets you on Santa's nice and naughty list lol
"provoking & petite
playfully playacts
Eyes hook;" - like claws dragging us off to feed somewhere a bit more cozy and quaint. try to keep me quiet and i'll scream. sitting us over the edge on a tight rope racing for the finish line but pausing to take in the view 300 feet up above the cliffs below.
well penned AtoMik you've sent us all off the edge once again dropped us in a basket and sent us out on the Nile but you better believe we will be back to turn staffs into snakes lol.
this write is satisfying to the senses reminding me that even a punctuation could push us over the edge at any moment.
"pierced with little
hints
befitting this notion;
A nominal nymph " - this gets you on Santa's nice and naughty list lol
"provoking & petite
playfully playacts
Eyes hook;" - like claws dragging us off to feed somewhere a bit more cozy and quaint. try to keep me quiet and i'll scream. sitting us over the edge on a tight rope racing for the finish line but pausing to take in the view 300 feet up above the cliffs below.
well penned AtoMik you've sent us all off the edge once again dropped us in a basket and sent us out on the Nile but you better believe we will be back to turn staffs into snakes lol.
15th Dec 2017 9:30pm
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 10:10pm
AtoMik.. truly dig this.. a different kinda ink.. like an onion, poetry has many layers.. we just have to be open to new ideas.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
16th Dec 2017 00:34am
Anonymous
- Edited 31st Aug 2018 2:45pm
16th Dec 2017 4:30pm
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16th Dec 2017 7:03pm
Thank you :) I was aiming for something light, but still engaging. I appreciate that, and nice to meet you!
Anonymous
- Edited 31st Aug 2018 2:45pm
16th Dec 2017 7:29pm
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