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Couldn't Help It...
Every morning I wake
My sweet tooth always speaks:
"Feed me you being!
Don't you disappoint my needs!"
So I get up off my bed
through the pink sheets, to the door
down the steps I go
then in the kitchen, I seek
The mighty storage holds many things
but sweets, are rarely kept
Looked through every place
for boxed & canned goods
then...
A blue box catches my eye!
I grabbed and smiled in delight-
"Blueberry pancake"
Bones inside my mouth
spoke once more
exclaimed in joy-
"Yes! Yes, YES!
feed me now, you feeble slave!"
In master's command, I respond
grab the bowl
pour the milk
mix...with flavored cake-mix
A automatic command
the cake was done
I covered it
with peanut-butter-jam
then smothered it
with sugared artificial liquid
Ate and ate every inch of its bite
Digest and ingest
Its mal-nutrition, "good" nutrition
Her hunger is satisfied
Soon...
Diabetes will pay his visit
My sweet tooth always speaks:
"Feed me you being!
Don't you disappoint my needs!"
So I get up off my bed
through the pink sheets, to the door
down the steps I go
then in the kitchen, I seek
The mighty storage holds many things
but sweets, are rarely kept
Looked through every place
for boxed & canned goods
then...
A blue box catches my eye!
I grabbed and smiled in delight-
"Blueberry pancake"
Bones inside my mouth
spoke once more
exclaimed in joy-
"Yes! Yes, YES!
feed me now, you feeble slave!"
In master's command, I respond
grab the bowl
pour the milk
mix...with flavored cake-mix
A automatic command
the cake was done
I covered it
with peanut-butter-jam
then smothered it
with sugared artificial liquid
Ate and ate every inch of its bite
Digest and ingest
Its mal-nutrition, "good" nutrition
Her hunger is satisfied
Soon...
Diabetes will pay his visit
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Re. Couldn't Help It...
9th Dec 2017 7:09pm
Lol at your sweet tooth...but yea, Diabetes ain't no joke :(...
Here's prayin u never suffer it's torment...
Here's prayin u never suffer it's torment...
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Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
Thank you dear Poetik-madendness
for your company in my work of fun!
Your visits always brings me joy! :)
Love
H
for your company in my work of fun!
Your visits always brings me joy! :)
Love
H
Re. Couldn't Help It...
9th Dec 2017 8:39pm
Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
9th Dec 2017 8:44pm
Thanks Big sis...:)
Fun is a great way to describe it!
Thank you for your visit!
H
Fun is a great way to describe it!
Thank you for your visit!
H
Re. Couldn't Help It...
9th Dec 2017 8:48pm
Well that was a fun read and the diabetes comment at the end was priceless great work!
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Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
9th Dec 2017 9:02pm
Thanks Tyler
:)
I'm glad you had fun reading my work, and greatly appreciate your visit dear poet!
Love
H
:)
I'm glad you had fun reading my work, and greatly appreciate your visit dear poet!
Love
H
Re. Couldn't Help It...
9th Dec 2017 10:06pm
I truly enjoyed it... We can laugh (and laugh aloud) about our absurd little choices, but. these are the ones that indicate a sense of us being in some kind of control of our lives!
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Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
9th Dec 2017 10:20pm
glad you did dear takis!
and yes...
some the weird decisions in life...
and things getting i control..
thank-you for your visit! :]
Love
H
and yes...
some the weird decisions in life...
and things getting i control..
thank-you for your visit! :]
Love
H
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10th Dec 2017 7:53am
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Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
10th Dec 2017 8:31am
Thank you so much for seeing such excellence in my writing dear poet! :)
I greatly appreciate your kind visit, and am glad you enjoyed the humor I saw!
Love
H
I greatly appreciate your kind visit, and am glad you enjoyed the humor I saw!
Love
H
Anonymous
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10th Dec 2017 5:10pm
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Re. Couldn't Help It...
10th Dec 2017 9:18am
This is cute and fun, and helps to see some of your lifestyle. Just like many of my friends they love sweet stuff so much.....
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
10th Dec 2017 9:21am
Thank you so much dear sweet Jasmine :)
I love sweets...my sweetthooth knows who's the boss... lol
I greatly appreciate your visit dear poetess <3
Love
H
I love sweets...my sweetthooth knows who's the boss... lol
I greatly appreciate your visit dear poetess <3
Love
H
Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
10th Dec 2017 9:23am
Re. Couldn't Help It...
off to go buy brownie mix and ice cream...I was commanded by my sweet tooth...she is a dictator, you know...
loving sweetly
Jeff
loving sweetly
Jeff
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Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
11th Dec 2017 8:37pm
Haha, I appreciate your lovin' dear Jeff :)
yes... my sweet tooth seems to monarch over me as well...
I'm bout to show who rEAlly rules-
my will!
lol she's got me good ...
<3
H
yes... my sweet tooth seems to monarch over me as well...
I'm bout to show who rEAlly rules-
my will!
lol she's got me good ...
<3
H
Re. Couldn't Help It...
16th Dec 2017 00:04am
Superbly playful! Your mouth speaking to you was excellent personification. And your ending was noir humor at its finest! This is a homerun which I enjoyed thoroughly. ;)
John
John
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Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
16th Dec 2017 2:19am
Oh dear John! You're making me blush here...
I do love playing with my words and my sweet tooth lol
I greatly appreciate your praise to me works, it's so heart-warming! :)
<3
H
I do love playing with my words and my sweet tooth lol
I greatly appreciate your praise to me works, it's so heart-warming! :)
<3
H
Re. Couldn't Help It...
Anonymous
8th Jan 2018 11:20pm
delicious/ lovely to read, thank you :)
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Re: Re. Couldn't Help It...
8th Jan 2018 11:27pm