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A Wresting Of Flesh
It feels like pigskin;
a Shanghai
hijack
of this tanned
torn hide
so tattered
Tapestries iron themselves
into me
invading
fell & foul
Howling from
an anti-flaying
inhaling slough
down...down...
Dragging decay
so curdled -
to shriveling lungs (shrieking)
raking past my tongue
It scalps away
the sane
the humane...
Awaking to eerie
inverse dawns
like T. Leary theories;
Though, infected...
fresh fungal flesh feastings
feed me
another cordyceps day
The Eternal Darkness Of The Squalid Mind
a Shanghai
hijack
of this tanned
torn hide
so tattered
Tapestries iron themselves
into me
invading
fell & foul
Howling from
an anti-flaying
inhaling slough
down...down...
Dragging decay
so curdled -
to shriveling lungs (shrieking)
raking past my tongue
It scalps away
the sane
the humane...
Awaking to eerie
inverse dawns
like T. Leary theories;
Though, infected...
fresh fungal flesh feastings
feed me
another cordyceps day
The Eternal Darkness Of The Squalid Mind
Published 8th Dec 2017
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8th Dec 2017 9:47pm
8th Dec 2017 11:48pm
I can't believe in saying in glad about that, but I am in the sense that it was effective :)
8th Dec 2017 11:54pm
it scalps away the sane, the humane
... so I winced as I feel my own skin tearing away from the flesh
... so I winced as I feel my own skin tearing away from the flesh
8th Dec 2017 10:03pm
woooo....The Lady's on fire. (Anything writ'bout Joan of Arc couldn't be, uh, "better")...... you be [a]mazing.......
Anonymous
9th Dec 2017 1:35pm
beautiful imagery. whether a poem is dark, light or somewhere in between i think it is essential to carry that image in the most visceral manner. your word choice hit me squarely. the poem is open enough that it doesn't have to be set aside in some narrow category, yet "dark" is appropriate.
9th Dec 2017 7:10pm
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9th Dec 2017 8:55pm
"Tapestries iron themselves ... into me... invading ... fell & foul "
I love that.
I love that.
9th Dec 2017 9:17pm
Thank you for the read and the comment! :)
Actually, thank all of the new people here, glad to meet you all!
Actually, thank all of the new people here, glad to meet you all!
Anonymous
9th Dec 2017 11:58pm
AtoMik.. brilliantly done.. love the reference to Leary.. really dig your poetic depth.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
10th Dec 2017 00:45am
10th Dec 2017 4:47pm
Slaughter house sleep time
grab me a blanket won't you
staple the skin up to make a tee pee
secrets unfolding
steaming
flay knives
they put me in the coffin but i was still alive
did they not hear the screams?
at least put me down
the sun does not set in the deep underground
i'll stay the same
filthy mind
the title along "a wresting of flesh" i imagine someone holding a fist full of pulled flesh that's not there own.
i really want to watch the remake of the Texas chainsaw massacre .
you have filled my horror quota for the day.
only question left is how do you like your steak?
MEDIUM RARE!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cT0ZhOV6Bl8
great poem AtoMik
you very well may be one of my favorite poets on here to annoy lol.
grab me a blanket won't you
staple the skin up to make a tee pee
secrets unfolding
steaming
flay knives
they put me in the coffin but i was still alive
did they not hear the screams?
at least put me down
the sun does not set in the deep underground
i'll stay the same
filthy mind
the title along "a wresting of flesh" i imagine someone holding a fist full of pulled flesh that's not there own.
i really want to watch the remake of the Texas chainsaw massacre .
you have filled my horror quota for the day.
only question left is how do you like your steak?
MEDIUM RARE!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cT0ZhOV6Bl8
great poem AtoMik
you very well may be one of my favorite poets on here to annoy lol.
10th Dec 2017 5:31pm
How do you even do that!? It would take me some time to spinoff a poem so quickly! 😆
"the sun does not set in the deep underground " So true...so very true!
Keep bugging me ROFL!
"the sun does not set in the deep underground " So true...so very true!
Keep bugging me ROFL!
10th Dec 2017 5:38pm
great poets inspire. i hope you publish one day.i'll totally take a signed copy.
there's actually a few poets on here i'd really like to see publish a full collection of work.
holding words like tea cups
smashing on the floor
spill
like parlor tricks
in the trap door
there's actually a few poets on here i'd really like to see publish a full collection of work.
holding words like tea cups
smashing on the floor
spill
like parlor tricks
in the trap door
