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all the people wander freely all of them they wander well and all the time i wonder why they don't stop walking empty busy dry inside a shell;
everyone is focused on this special something what's the sense in doing something anyone and everyone is loving something everyone you owe me nothing i know nothing;
i know nothing of these ways of liking all those things don't seem to me they just don't seem to be that striking anymore and anyways anybeauty and so called beauty is that one time feeling longing for it longing losing;
happy hiking in these hills get lost and don't stop liking buried feeling undead thrills experience reexperience re and reexperience and re my life just re me something;
i lost it all I own it now again again I know I have a plan to find I want I plan to not to plan and in the moment I can dwell in fever free in one piece piece and peacefully I follow I unfollow me.
I lost my footing decomposed brown leafs I lost it all of my beliefs I found them out the thieves these hands they did not stop release myself from empty bars and make belief create belief;
I long to look out for the yellow sky to fall through it and never try to run from it. Beauty pure one in my mind to love in short now I am kind.
everyone is focused on this special something what's the sense in doing something anyone and everyone is loving something everyone you owe me nothing i know nothing;
i know nothing of these ways of liking all those things don't seem to me they just don't seem to be that striking anymore and anyways anybeauty and so called beauty is that one time feeling longing for it longing losing;
happy hiking in these hills get lost and don't stop liking buried feeling undead thrills experience reexperience re and reexperience and re my life just re me something;
i lost it all I own it now again again I know I have a plan to find I want I plan to not to plan and in the moment I can dwell in fever free in one piece piece and peacefully I follow I unfollow me.
I lost my footing decomposed brown leafs I lost it all of my beliefs I found them out the thieves these hands they did not stop release myself from empty bars and make belief create belief;
I long to look out for the yellow sky to fall through it and never try to run from it. Beauty pure one in my mind to love in short now I am kind.
Published 6th Dec 2017
| Edited 20th Jun 2018
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9th Dec 2017 7:34pm
I loved the way you play with words!! Really truly interesting. Using the morpheme re as a word, and the strange repetition of sounds and stuff, it works really well. Also interwoven in all these kinda hectic words, moving so quickly there's a reference to a hike, and leaves, like outta nowhere, as a metaphor for life and experiences I guess. I'm glad you're kind now. But I don't entirely understand the name of the poem. 1234567890? I don't get it. Also is your profile pic the mandelbrot set?
11th Dec 2017 9:08pm
hey ORPHEUS,
thanks for the kind words. The picture is indeed a "slightly" stylized version of the mandelbrot set, I found it online and find it very appealing :)
thanks for the kind words. The picture is indeed a "slightly" stylized version of the mandelbrot set, I found it online and find it very appealing :)
11th Dec 2017 9:46pm
It is appealing, the mandelbrot set is really cool. I love watching those deep zoom videos where they go really deep into it ya know. I've always wondered if there were real world things represented, somewhere, deep in the set. Like just a super detailed picture of earth, or a proof of the the twin primes conjecture, or the Bhagavadgita or something. I know it depends on how the divergence is represented with color. But still something infinite like that is bound to contain something weird.
11th Dec 2017 10:19pm
No matter how much I try to get used to it, I still find the concept of infinity very hard to grasp, which seems pretty 'natural' though. Good thing that there's also a humorous side to it (give a monkey an infinite amount of time and see what happens ^^ )
