It fades

slamming last line beautiful one
to a very passionate write..

I can feel your pain here..

"I hoped
even after we parted
One day
it could be... "

the pain of holding out hope
is the worst kind I think..

your heart lay bare beautiful..

love Crim

Thank you so much dear Crim...yes, I must agree, it is the most painful when hope it held, even with proof there is none.

Greatly appreciate your visit,
Love
H

A truly smooth flowing ink, even given the sad subject matter.

Why... Thank you!
:)
I appreciate your continued support dear poet.
Love
H

Painful read dear Sour and heart aches you even had reason to put down such words...these lines cut into me like a heated blade through butter

"Hope your new love isn't the same-

an illusion"

xoxo Taryn

Thank you so graciously..! For your lovely visit, and feeling my works :)

I am grateful for your time in my feels dear Taryn
Love
H

beautifully  crafted sad, sad poem - I was really able to connect to this one sadly :-)

Excellent ink :-)

I am glad your were able to connect through my words dear david!
Thank you so much for your kind visit, and your time is greatly appreciated :)

Love
H

Painfully relatable exprssion. But in suffering, there is often beauty most profound

I see...I guess there is once that suffering is overcome, then beauty must strive...

Thank you for your visit :)

Love
H

It’s always hard to say goodbye. I feel whenever I have to say goodbye to someone I care for that one day it will be like it was before, or some kind of friendship. Unfortunately goodbye is really goodbye when it comes to relationships.

Wonderful poem 😁

Thank you so very much for such wonderful comment upon my work...  it's hard to part your heart away from a lover, even after the last goodbye that you know too well... I am thankful for your understanding, and time dear LK.

Love<3
H

i did not feel much love. my favorite words are "Admired its richness / the color...the red / Passion."

Thank you for your feedback..!
I grately appreciate


<3
H