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In-explainable agony
let me sit,
just in this agony,
hope pleading on
but blood stained wrists,
my tale has a much broken twist,
I paint this beautiful picture with a story you'll never see,
like the sand falling away beneath my bare feet,
you slipped away when I forgot to be fixed,
I love you everyday but you know not of the pain,
your happier today and now its not upon me,
with in-explainable dread,
forever and always alas came to its end.
just in this agony,
hope pleading on
but blood stained wrists,
my tale has a much broken twist,
I paint this beautiful picture with a story you'll never see,
like the sand falling away beneath my bare feet,
you slipped away when I forgot to be fixed,
I love you everyday but you know not of the pain,
your happier today and now its not upon me,
with in-explainable dread,
forever and always alas came to its end.
Published 29th Nov 2017
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14th Dec 2017 3:56pm
This is a very proper poem
with a nice structure
good imagery with the blood stained wrists,sand on the feet falling
and the emotion captured just enough where it's not overpowering to the reader.
well penned Bean, keep'em coming.
with a nice structure
good imagery with the blood stained wrists,sand on the feet falling
and the emotion captured just enough where it's not overpowering to the reader.
well penned Bean, keep'em coming.
14th Dec 2017 6:08pm
