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His Unspoken Love
"Show me your scars", he said
"What ? But... Why BABE ?", she replied
"I want to see how many times you needed me and I wasn't there", he whispered, a tear rolling down his cheeks.
"What ? But... Why BABE ?", she replied
"I want to see how many times you needed me and I wasn't there", he whispered, a tear rolling down his cheeks.
Published 27th Nov 2017
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27th Nov 2017 5:27pm
so brutal and packs a powerful punch for a short lined poem.
well penned Rads_15
the hurt bleeds through this piece
well penned Rads_15
the hurt bleeds through this piece
27th Nov 2017 8:21pm
My words are like antibiotic 🎭 pills for this incurable disease !
Thank-you ! I appreciate your thoughts ^^
Thank-you ! I appreciate your thoughts ^^
