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My Window
Is the vision you see
From my window
Lovely
I hope so
Every morning
I open my window
To inhale the poetry air
To discover who is there
To build up my writing scale
When you go on DUP
You will see my open window
Where I am standing by
Looking out for the passersby
Keep going on and off the site
I will be always there
No vacations or holidays
Smiling at your presence
And saying hello
By my window
From my window
Lovely
I hope so
Every morning
I open my window
To inhale the poetry air
To discover who is there
To build up my writing scale
When you go on DUP
You will see my open window
Where I am standing by
Looking out for the passersby
Keep going on and off the site
I will be always there
No vacations or holidays
Smiling at your presence
And saying hello
By my window
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Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 7:57am
Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 8:13am
Thank you SourMelon for the friendly feedback. Your presence is such a beautiful view for me. Thank you for coming into my life.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 8:03am
see Jasmine ..you have the deepest sweetest soul my lovely....this is a big hug to us all here in the underground....and we intensely hug you back
love Jeff
love Jeff
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Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 8:18am
Oh Jeff, my dearest friend, you are not the passerby, we always exchange messages and have a cup of tea inside my house. Love your visit very much!
Much love, Jasmine
Much love, Jasmine
Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 8:20am
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26th Nov 2017 8:23am
Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 10:09am
This reminded me of a poem I wrote long, long ago titled "Daylights Darkness". Very reflective of my mood today, though I wrote it nearly 27 years ago...
We share the same shadows
Though we never have met
Watching love pass our windows
But that's not what we get
Someone almost looked in
So I pulled down the shades
I wonder what might have been
But the thought quickly fades
There was a look in your eyes
Erased by a whisper of fear
We'll never know if it lies
Pretending we cannot hear
Living parallel lives
Close in so many ways
Because we want without drive
We are so far away
Right under our noses
On the very same street
Right under our noses
Is a nice place to meet
JJ
We share the same shadows
Though we never have met
Watching love pass our windows
But that's not what we get
Someone almost looked in
So I pulled down the shades
I wonder what might have been
But the thought quickly fades
There was a look in your eyes
Erased by a whisper of fear
We'll never know if it lies
Pretending we cannot hear
Living parallel lives
Close in so many ways
Because we want without drive
We are so far away
Right under our noses
On the very same street
Right under our noses
Is a nice place to meet
JJ
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Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 12:34pm
Look at you JJ, your peom is amazingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing your thought, especially your peom. Such deep insight transcents time and space, why not to post it again for everybody to read? Thank you for the support.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 12:42pm
Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 2:57pm
There should be some way you can do. I have read some poems that are old and reposted......
Re. My Window
Anonymous
26th Nov 2017 1:23pm
I sit on my back porch and do the same as you looking through your window.
Enjoyed this Rose.
Enjoyed this Rose.
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Re: Re. My Window
Hope through my window I can see your back porch.... what a view of you there would be...hope I can see you pass through my window and say hi later. Thank you for the always support.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 2:14pm
if I say some thing about windows poetree rosy you will have to turn your head and smile when i say take care of your windows before someone pulls down the curtain and you wouldn't know down under is full of sprawling ones to pierce through windows you are to safe guard your self from such fellows some one told me today she waved at him he was a passerby and he thought the wave was like come over and he came what happened can't be explained again would be maimed
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Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 3:02pm
What an interesting story....I won't wave my hand but only smile....
I will watch out and take care of my window. Thank you!
Much love, RoseJasmine
I will watch out and take care of my window. Thank you!
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 5:04pm
Always enjoy passing by your window ... seeing a new poem of yours in my updates brings a smile and warm invitation to share your thoughts and feelings. Poet on my sweet poetess ... poet on.
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Wish you were the poet and I was the poetess....Romeo used to pass by Juliet's window....what a view....very happy to see your presence every day, that's quite blissful my dear. You are giving me more and more.....
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 5:23pm
Hello from the other side
I just opened my window
and I saw your lovely piece
I just opened my window
and I saw your lovely piece
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Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 6:27pm
Hello Lucius, nice to see you. Do you want a cup of tea and a piece of cake....thank you for passing by and saying hello to me.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 8:51pm
Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 9:12pm
Re: Re. My Window
26th Nov 2017 11:14pm
Oh hi, what do you want to buy? It's interesting to write this one. Glad you stopped by and said hi. Thank you for the inspiration and the support.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
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27th Nov 2017 4:23pm
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Re: Re. My Window
27th Nov 2017 5:17pm
Ah finally I saw you before I am going to close the window. Always enjoy seeing you pass by and peer through my window. You are welcome to come in and have a cup of tea Stillborn. :))))
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
28th Nov 2017 1:58pm
Fantastic window aspect of sights and souls passing
by words
whispers
wings
saying hello to the hearts that breathe insight
and a deeper Love for the same world of poetry
by words
whispers
wings
saying hello to the hearts that breathe insight
and a deeper Love for the same world of poetry
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Nice to see you pass by my window and say hi to me Samael. Love the sight you were riding a bike and whistling by, I guess the one at the front was you. Now you are driving a jeep, still cool but the biking one is cooler....anyway, I love standing by my window, look at everyone and fantasize their stories.....thank you for the support!
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
28th Nov 2017 3:10pm
i was just heading to work on my bicycle, thought i'd stop by and see how you were feeling today lol
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28th Nov 2017 3:13pm
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29th Nov 2017 7:00am
Hey Lawrence, glad you passed by my window and said hello. Thank you for the warm greeting.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
29th Nov 2017 1:28pm
Aaaaawww...what a precious n sweet sight
Mixin perfectly with the warmth of a smile... :)
Mixin perfectly with the warmth of a smile... :)
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Re: Re. My Window
29th Nov 2017 1:38pm
Thank you Ric for stopping by and saying hi. You are always welcome to come in. Appreciate your visit very much!
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. My Window
23rd Mar 2018 5:07pm
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23rd Mar 2018 5:11pm
Thank you dear Daffodil, glad to see you every day through my window. You are such a sincere and beautiful soul.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine