Not so Black Friday

As poem states I'm inebriated, so it's probably not best work, but I'm sober enough to craft and post; have at it and ravage it if you so desire.

I have learned through the years, an argument with alcohol, is a futile effort.

I will however acknowledge your comment on your own work.

My "Honest Critique" as requested.

In what way(s) is it futile?

To me, when one is under the influence of an intoxicant, seldom are they open to intelligent debate, (myself included), for they have given up their ability to do so to the intoxicant. My initial comment referred to your statement of "possibly not my best work".

As to the poem itself, I found it well written, hence I believe you were inebriated just enough to lose some inhibition yet not so much as to lose all, which I feel is when the true self is revealed.  

I must be an exception. I engage, debate, and can be persuaded while intoxicated; although, my output language is muddled. Ah, even sober I think it's not my best nor better work.

Thank you. I try to avoid that level of drunkenness.  

good write. It seems to show a side of you that yet we all have. having desires such as and showing with no trepidation.

That makes sense for alcohol loosened my lips.

You must have been feeling very confident that night?  Very different, I must say.  Quinn

Haha less confident, more loose and unthinking.