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Mitigating Melancholy
Tribulations set - incessant
our volume dials
& degree of trials
are profiled taboos turned too high
State fault lines fence
boundaries for friendly breadth
through baking worded showbread
we present poems of verdant depth
Transposing sustaining solaces
scripting toward temporal semblances
of salted wholeness
Allies of transcribed influence
friends with polished pens
lessening the poignant lonlinesses
***
For my creative compadre, cloventongue89 😊 Thanks dude, the support means an epic TON.
our volume dials
& degree of trials
are profiled taboos turned too high
State fault lines fence
boundaries for friendly breadth
through baking worded showbread
we present poems of verdant depth
Transposing sustaining solaces
scripting toward temporal semblances
of salted wholeness
Allies of transcribed influence
friends with polished pens
lessening the poignant lonlinesses
***
For my creative compadre, cloventongue89 😊 Thanks dude, the support means an epic TON.
Published 21st Nov 2017
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2017 8:29pm
A beautiful tribute to cloventoungue89. Thank you for kicking off the comp! Friends are lifelines in these days and times.
21st Nov 2017 8:43pm
I read the title and feel like lawyering up lol
ohhh you done broke out the $5.00 words on us.
i've not heard anyone use incessant in awhile, good job.
i like Taboo it takes me to creepy places where i should probably lay something over the seat if i sit down due to human or animal fluids.
"through baking worded showbread"- this sounds crazy
"friends with polished pens"- i like fountain pens but have very few real friends because i work like 80 hours a week
"lessening the poignant lonlinesses"- back to the lonlinesses with few friends...thanks hahaha
great write AtoMik.
ohhh you done broke out the $5.00 words on us.
i've not heard anyone use incessant in awhile, good job.
i like Taboo it takes me to creepy places where i should probably lay something over the seat if i sit down due to human or animal fluids.
"through baking worded showbread"- this sounds crazy
"friends with polished pens"- i like fountain pens but have very few real friends because i work like 80 hours a week
"lessening the poignant lonlinesses"- back to the lonlinesses with few friends...thanks hahaha
great write AtoMik.
21st Nov 2017 8:59pm
Haha! Thanks again for excellent feedback! 😊 I kind of went nuts on this one, I regret nothin'!
23rd Nov 2017 1:03pm
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21st Nov 2017 10:51pm
Anonymous
21st Nov 2017 10:57pm
Fantastic compliment to a fantastic writer.
Well done
Well done
23rd Nov 2017 2:21am
more beautiful words - "we present poems of verdant depth - lessening the poignant lonlinesses" I think these two line go perfectly together :-)))
Big LIKE! :-))))))
Big LIKE! :-))))))
23rd Nov 2017 2:55am
