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THE ONE
its not nice to be a slutty
so she looks for the one
cause mommy told her
its not right to have fun
and now she is married
for many long years
they fight like porcupines
and weep blood and tears
virgins are good
sluts are bad
as long as your dupes
you'll always be sad
the world needs to change
lets wake up
love is a range
and get unstuck
we can love each other
polyamour
long nights in heaven
kisses galore
its a new aeon
the aquarian age
enough stagnation
lets turn the page
Published 19th Nov 2017
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I love its message...!
I interpreted it as
how we all should just purely look for real love...
Not just flirting with others' hearts and shamelessly breaking them..
still I love this piece..!
-H-
I interpreted it as
how we all should just purely look for real love...
Not just flirting with others' hearts and shamelessly breaking them..
still I love this piece..!
-H-
19th Nov 2017 6:16pm
YES YOU HAVE IT RIGHT...BUT I WOULD LIKE TO ADD THAT LOVE IS AN ARCHETYPE ....ANIMALS EVEN FEEL IT AND SO ARE ALL THE OTHER EMOTIONS THAT PEOPLE HAVE ...AND LOVE AND DEVOTION CAN BE THE HALL MARK OF A RELATIONSHIP FOR AN EXTENDED TIME BUT IT CAN ALSO SHIFT AS WE ALL KNOW...WE LIVE IN A LANDSCAPE OF DESOLATION BECAUSE WE ARE ONLY SUPPOSE TO HAVE SEX WITH SOME ONE THAT IS SPECIAL..i THINK THAT IS AN AGENCY OF A LONG HISTORY OF SOCIAL ENGINEERING
i SEE MANY WOMEN I COULD REALLY ENJOY SEXUALLY ...IF WE WEREN'T ALL SO DESOLATED BY VICTORIAN RELIGIOUS VALUES AND INSECURE BY MAKING FREE SEX AS A TABOO ONLY RESERVED FOR THE MOST INTIMATE RELATIONSHIPS I THINK WE WOULD ALL FEEL A LOT BETTER...BECAUSE THE ONE IS EPHEMERAL ....THATS WHY MARRIAGE WHILE MAKING US FEEL SECURE CAN ALSO BE THE BANE
i SEE MANY WOMEN I COULD REALLY ENJOY SEXUALLY ...IF WE WEREN'T ALL SO DESOLATED BY VICTORIAN RELIGIOUS VALUES AND INSECURE BY MAKING FREE SEX AS A TABOO ONLY RESERVED FOR THE MOST INTIMATE RELATIONSHIPS I THINK WE WOULD ALL FEEL A LOT BETTER...BECAUSE THE ONE IS EPHEMERAL ....THATS WHY MARRIAGE WHILE MAKING US FEEL SECURE CAN ALSO BE THE BANE
