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My Beautiful Love
It is soft
It isn't worth very much
Like a porcelain doll it is fragile-- so easily broken
It's value to me is more then my very soul
Like days gone by or fare wells unsaid I wish only to share our time together once more
To hold a piece of the Sun in my cool embrace and to ravish you for these desserts so sweetly deserved
Closer then one of my own we are a single part of two
Loosely flowing, moving, breathing
Now filled with brilliant light that dances under the stars
My beautiful love is suppressed while you bare it's mark
As softly though as a dream from deep in my chest it hums a tune of my glee
A sole witness to the words unspoken within
I love deeply in the silence of the sounds unheard to the untrained ear
Written and published by A Nameless Traveler A.K.A. -Andrew F. R. Kerklaan
It isn't worth very much
Like a porcelain doll it is fragile-- so easily broken
It's value to me is more then my very soul
Like days gone by or fare wells unsaid I wish only to share our time together once more
To hold a piece of the Sun in my cool embrace and to ravish you for these desserts so sweetly deserved
Closer then one of my own we are a single part of two
Loosely flowing, moving, breathing
Now filled with brilliant light that dances under the stars
My beautiful love is suppressed while you bare it's mark
As softly though as a dream from deep in my chest it hums a tune of my glee
A sole witness to the words unspoken within
I love deeply in the silence of the sounds unheard to the untrained ear
Written and published by A Nameless Traveler A.K.A. -Andrew F. R. Kerklaan
Published 18th Sep 2011
| Edited 3rd Sep 2012
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12th Nov 2011 11:41pm
Describing love is very difficult to do, but to describe ones own love in my opinion is the hardest of all, because often the words never seem right to ourselves and never measure truly to what we feel.
However I think you have truly caught something in this piece and I find it beautiful, it's fleeting and between each line is something more for a reader to consider and learn.
Excellent work brother.
However I think you have truly caught something in this piece and I find it beautiful, it's fleeting and between each line is something more for a reader to consider and learn.
Excellent work brother.
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