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A Moment ....
She sits in silence as the crisp air embraces her skin
Goose bumps exposed as the milky smoke dances in front of her eyes from the burning Black&Mild.
She's lost in her mind
Kisses her wrist to apologize as her body heals; forgiving her broken soul.
Leaving marks to remind her of that moment where she was defeated by her emotions.
Goose bumps exposed as the milky smoke dances in front of her eyes from the burning Black&Mild.
She's lost in her mind
Kisses her wrist to apologize as her body heals; forgiving her broken soul.
Leaving marks to remind her of that moment where she was defeated by her emotions.
Published 17th Nov 2017
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5th Feb 2020 6:16pm
This is a poignant scene, the details crisp and vivid. The essence of economy and brevity in tandem, there is much subtly revealed in few words. Thank you for sharing this with us. 💖
I would be thrilled if you would consider sending an audio of this poem to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. An audio poem has fuller dimensions, with your unique vocal inflections, and the feature may draw attention to your poems on site, help forge new friendships. If you would be amenable, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the title of the poem, to:
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In kindness,
Daniel
I would be thrilled if you would consider sending an audio of this poem to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. An audio poem has fuller dimensions, with your unique vocal inflections, and the feature may draw attention to your poems on site, help forge new friendships. If you would be amenable, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the title of the poem, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
5th Feb 2020 6:58pm
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