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Up In Dem Holes
“speechless.....”
all up in dem holes
like a heatwave....a freak on a leash
locomotive breath
all out of control
deep.....all up in dem holes
souls
out of body
hovering high above
this kinky scene
in and out sympathetically
gyrating
vibrating
rotating
pulsating
observations of the sublime. The obscene...
small faces.....wild screams
un-natural expressions of pain and pleasure
insanity
über wet dreams
her brown-puckered hole-a-straining
while getting'
deliciously reamed
all up in dem holes, lawd
pussy streaming
hot-butter cream
steam rising all up in between.....friction
(thrust after torrid thrust)
….all up in dem holes....tearin' it up
mutual
mental
masturbating
erotic elation
sensual elevation......heaven
all up in dem holes, lawd
Published 16th Nov 2017
| Edited 17th Nov 2017
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17th Nov 2017 00:13am
Wow. MY favorite part is.....
small faces.....wild screams
un-natural expressions of pain and pleasure
insanity
über wet dreams
her brown-puckered hole-a-straining
while getting'
deliciously reamed
all up in dem holes, lawd
Damn.... This was a treat. Such a delicious and breath-taking description of a sexual encounter...
17th Nov 2017 6:41am
Always fascinating the way an act that provides so much pleasure and gets the endorphins going can produce such pained facial expressions.
17th Nov 2017 12:52pm
Wonderfully written Musically. Ah....those damn holes, how delicious it is.
This part made me chuckle,
"pussy streaming
hot-butter cream
steam rising all up in between.....friction
(thrust after torrid thrust)
….all up in dem holes....tearin' it up"
Yeah! Get it! haha!
This part made me chuckle,
"pussy streaming
hot-butter cream
steam rising all up in between.....friction
(thrust after torrid thrust)
….all up in dem holes....tearin' it up"
Yeah! Get it! haha!
Anonymous
17th Nov 2017 7:17pm
Seems you have an apatite for life. Excellent use of pen and expression of cravings and lust. Well done.
18th Nov 2017 3:13am
