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RoadHead
C'mere my daddy
Don't be afraid
come grasp and hold me tight...
Let's play...
Tom n' Jerry
I'll be your kitty-
you can be my mouse!
I'll chase you
Licking my lips
Dreaming the taste-
Of your feeding pleasure
Mine and only mine....
C'mere my darling
lemme satisfy your fear
I'm your girl gone wild gone wrong...
So pull your dick n' pull over
Roll over and come hover;
"who said a side of the road is a bad place?"
I shall finish you off
I'm a hungry kitty...
Let me drink your every liquid
Then-
We shall go on
Get a move on
In this drive we were on...
Soon-
We shall arrive our room
To our secret place
To finish
Me
(purrs n' meows)
Written by
SourMelon0313
(H)
Published 16th Nov 2017
| Edited 20th Nov 2017
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(Not a Serious Piece)
This one's a less edited version of many of my poems (although I edited this a little bit)
a poem written for fun..!
More work could be done in this,
but some word choice I added was inspired by poetikmind(no, I won't steal his style of "n's !")
And the title, I give credit to a friend of mine I shared this to..!
I REALLY liked the "RoadHead" lol
a poem written for fun..!
More work could be done in this,
but some word choice I added was inspired by poetikmind(no, I won't steal his style of "n's !")
And the title, I give credit to a friend of mine I shared this to..!
I REALLY liked the "RoadHead" lol
Re: (Not a Serious Piece)
16th Nov 2017 4:25am
Aaawww...I'm very honored by you feeling inspired by me... but I must say, this read pretty polished to me...it is also pretty spicy too, so I give u big props all around sweetness, u get better everytime out ... :)
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Re: (Not a Serious Piece)
16th Nov 2017 10:58pm
Thank you so much poetic..!
:)
Your great support and comments brings such joys to me..!
I'll do my best, to strive and improve
this shall mark the beginnings of my Journey...
Love,
-H-
:)
Your great support and comments brings such joys to me..!
I'll do my best, to strive and improve
this shall mark the beginnings of my Journey...
Love,
-H-
Re. RoadHead
16th Nov 2017 8:10am
this purrs and drips at the same time....mercy....
so sexy
-much love Jeff
so sexy
-much love Jeff
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Re: Re. RoadHead
16th Nov 2017 11:01pm
(purr)
Oh, there's no mercy in my car!
lol thank you Jeff, for your lovely comment..
always appreciate your support :)
Love,
-H-
Oh, there's no mercy in my car!
lol thank you Jeff, for your lovely comment..
always appreciate your support :)
Love,
-H-
Re. RoadHead
16th Nov 2017 11:22am
Re: Re. RoadHead
16th Nov 2017 11:04pm
And my adventures and journey only starts from here..!
Thank you so much Prometheus, your comments and time will always be greatly appreciated..
I try to be fair..
:)
Love,
-H-
Thank you so much Prometheus, your comments and time will always be greatly appreciated..
I try to be fair..
:)
Love,
-H-
Re: Re. RoadHead
17th Nov 2017 2:36am
i like to be fair also. thanks for your appreciation. i know a lot of my stuff is a little hokie, but dig a few pages in and i have some other things a bit more like what youve been uploading. a pleasure to read your stuff!!
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Re. RoadHead
16th Nov 2017 2:25pm
Meow!
great erotica, i've always wanted to have sex on the side of the road and you made it happen lol.excellent poem SourMelon0313.
great erotica, i've always wanted to have sex on the side of the road and you made it happen lol.excellent poem SourMelon0313.
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Re: Re. RoadHead
16th Nov 2017 11:06pm
Haha, we can make anything happen in our twisted,
passionate erotic imaginations...
Thank you so much Samael, for your comments and time reading :)
Love,
-H-
passionate erotic imaginations...
Thank you so much Samael, for your comments and time reading :)
Love,
-H-
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
17th Nov 2017 10:38pm
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17th Nov 2017 11:16pm
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12th Jan 2018 5:59am
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Re: Re. RoadHead
18th Dec 2019 5:23pm
oh no... you've came to the darkest of my experimental whirlpool lol
thank you for your comment !
<3
H
thank you for your comment !
<3
H