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Red Regime
The maggots shun
the maggots shun
up from the black
the net undone
A fortress stacked on the other one
to bask in the burn
not of the sun
The powers crawl on
a tower tall
a step in might
and the bridges fall
There's fresh dark eyes upon the wall
upon the wall...
God keep us all!
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Another older poem, from November of last year. I'll let you guess what it's about ;)
the maggots shun
up from the black
the net undone
A fortress stacked on the other one
to bask in the burn
not of the sun
The powers crawl on
a tower tall
a step in might
and the bridges fall
There's fresh dark eyes upon the wall
upon the wall...
God keep us all!
***
Another older poem, from November of last year. I'll let you guess what it's about ;)
Published 15th Nov 2017
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15th Nov 2017 8:45am
15th Nov 2017 2:35pm
15th Nov 2017 3:09pm
15th Nov 2017 9:44pm
I don't know what it is really about but I know what it made me think about - after my first amputation (foot and ankle) I managed to aqquire that flesh eating bug thing they tried everything to stop it, but bits of me were dying and turning black so they decided all that was left was to plug the hole with maggots. The treatment failed and they then had to go through the knee. they never apologised or lost their arrogance your last stanza made me think of them :-(
bet you didn't see that coming when you wrote it (lol) excellent ink :-)))))
bet you didn't see that coming when you wrote it (lol) excellent ink :-)))))
16th Nov 2017 4:30am
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18th Nov 2017 3:37am
AtoMik.. brilliantly done, as always.. dig your work.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
