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A lover's berceuse
My center, my vessel, my lovely diffraction,
singer of my soul and caster of stars.
I bleed passion, pressing my tender tips
to that long, graceful neck.
A gift of pain for a gift of pleasure,
a crest of ethereal light for an obscure heart.
Oh, how it hurts to love you,
but that voice...
And those curves;
I hold them so close, a lover's embrace.
Sorrow's saccharine lullaby
resonates between us.
And I am in love.
(Artwork: John Markese)
singer of my soul and caster of stars.
I bleed passion, pressing my tender tips
to that long, graceful neck.
A gift of pain for a gift of pleasure,
a crest of ethereal light for an obscure heart.
Oh, how it hurts to love you,
but that voice...
And those curves;
I hold them so close, a lover's embrace.
Sorrow's saccharine lullaby
resonates between us.
And I am in love.
(Artwork: John Markese)
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Re. A lover's berceuse
10th Nov 2017 9:47am
A sweet lullaby Kasai. It reminded me of a poem I wrote many years ago called "A Lovers Serenade"
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/27314-a-lovers-serenade/ . I very much enjoyed yours and the picture which had a similar theme to the one that inspired mine.
JJ
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/27314-a-lovers-serenade/ . I very much enjoyed yours and the picture which had a similar theme to the one that inspired mine.
JJ
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Re: Re. A lover's berceuse
21st Nov 2017 3:03am
Thank you for the link, JJ, it was a beautiful poem and I can see why and how the artwork inspired you.
Creation comes in so many forms, music, poetry, artwork....
all of them inspiring, all of them beautiful.
I really enjoyed your visit, thanks much...
Creation comes in so many forms, music, poetry, artwork....
all of them inspiring, all of them beautiful.
I really enjoyed your visit, thanks much...
Re. A lover's berceuse
10th Nov 2017 1:53pm
Re: Re. A lover's berceuse
6th Dec 2017 6:55am
Yes, wise one, soft and lovely
like a soothing lullaby. Thank you so much for the visit,
my apologies for the delayed response...
like a soothing lullaby. Thank you so much for the visit,
my apologies for the delayed response...
Re. A lover's berceuse
Anonymous
10th Nov 2017 2:13pm
I love when you write of your passion for your lady love, the guitar. So much beauty to be found there, and so much created between you. Lovely, Kasai, very lovely
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Re: Re. A lover's berceuse
6th Dec 2017 7:00am
Thank you so much, it's a compliment in itself just to know you've enjoyed. Music, poetry, artwork, all born from the most beautiful places in the human mind, glad you could share it with me...
Re. A lover's berceuse
10th Nov 2017 5:16pm
A vibrant verbal reduction <3 I feel that I'm treated to something especially raw and intimate here :)
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Re: Re. A lover's berceuse
6th Dec 2017 7:03am
You have quite a way with words, kind lady, and I appreciate your leaving them with me.
Thank you much, AtoMikbomb...
Thank you much, AtoMikbomb...
Re. A lover's berceuse
Anonymous
13th Nov 2017 2:15am
Love it, holds you from the first line
Sorrow's saccharine lullaby, love it
Sorrow's saccharine lullaby, love it
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6th Dec 2017 7:54am
Re. A lover's berceuse
13th Nov 2017 10:00pm
Such a gentle and beautiful poem K...a fine line between pleasure and pain...Eros and Eris walking hand in hand.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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14th Nov 2017 3:06am
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