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Collaboration Session 2

[Part 2]
{Meeting of the Minds}

(collab of Bliss and Prophet)  
 
‘Still A BIG Work in progress!
I want you to write two more chunks…
between my magma & razor thing
And one more
Then We'll see if I should chop it or not

AH, I'll just post it. we can mess with it later

Our poem is gonna be a 3 parter....
but it needs quite a bit of work
That one's the most complete.
 
The Second part requires much more work by you
It could be either 3 or 4 Parts.  
Haven't decided yet

nice
& I want you to add the ending after the cinders
And then maybe I'll come up with something more

This is getting good!

You cap on an ending & I'll squeeze in something somewhere
well...um...I edited it a bit & here we are
Still need an ending
 
You're an extremely hard rabbit to get a hold of’
 
 “Hey dude yeah been catching up on some sleep.  
Feels good and yawny still”
 
‘So, the vampire awakens
I gotta leave my door at 7:15 AM
So, let's get crackin'
I see the workings of a complete 4 parter here
unlesss you want more’
 
“Got your ending right here though”
 
‘Nice...I may have to slip in a line or 2
Ok...let me add to it....& Give Me like 5 min  
Be there
brilliant’
 
“I wanna definitely use perspective in the titles.
 Have you been to the grace cathedral in sf?”
 
‘I think once’
 
“The doors to it have the gates of paradise.  
The first use of perspective in art.  
A leap forward in our interpretations of our shared visual realities
They also have labyrinths everywhere for meditative walks”
 
 ‘K
I was thinking like matrix doors
And labyrinth doors (Hoggle)
And Dark Tower
Butt...I love where this is going

You fill in Everything of yours
....So this one is up to you!

So, we're almost done with this epic...
Just need a bit of input from you

 So you need to start & Finish this one>
But it won't need too much’
 
“Dude so blanking. Fuck”
 
'I love it.  
We need to name them, I guess
Does it matter that part 3 is  
twice as long as any other part?’
 
“A meeting of the minds? Wassup?
And dude length never be a problem.  
Tons of the last bit are one or two word lines.  
As long as it is doper than fuck”
Written by Prophet
Published | Edited 10th Jan 2012
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