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Carmel lies

I love you and your caramel eyes      
I love you, like feline to a ball of twine      
I love you, like fine wine and white lines      
I love you, like to pass the time watching you get ready every sunrise.    
     
like rising tides of liquor make most people blind and wash away the sandy silhouettes of stumbling steps and hands that set    
     
When only what I knew each night I would regret especially whoever was there present reminisced    
     
Drowning in every drink until I’m drunk just to forget    
     
Leading me on like every x to dig a grave because you made me spill my chest    
     
Treasuring our moment as momentum slowly gathered from our falling hearts and unaware rock bottom was just dead ahead because I had you there and then...    
     
For eternity I'll love you because forever and always never came or went.      
Forever brittle sweet inside your love to me is caramelized.
Written by IHate_BlackEye (Chuymonster)
Published | Edited 26th Feb 2018
Author's Note
About a woman with caramel colored eyes that I once loved while spun and drunk.
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