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Butterscotch and Moss - (For nature comp)
Sweet cisterns of sponge
seep
The blanket canteens sip
deeply
lushly dressed
This fungi fest...progresses...
a plushy, fluffy, mossy mess
Parched peach pins
(you couldn't hear)
slip though the crisp
to quilts ornate
plaiting straits at Winter's gate...
Jambalaya Substrate
seep
The blanket canteens sip
deeply
lushly dressed
This fungi fest...progresses...
a plushy, fluffy, mossy mess
Parched peach pins
(you couldn't hear)
slip though the crisp
to quilts ornate
plaiting straits at Winter's gate...
Jambalaya Substrate
Published 5th Nov 2017
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5th Nov 2017 7:13am
It's rare I come across purely distilled poetry, as I understand it. My works are very prosaic. There is a lot of noisome trite and insipid writing out there, hollow nails pounding dead wood. Worse is the eagle pinioned, arching throat of those who build word bridges to gorge on praise like a toad's tongue and portly catcher's mitt tummy. Ahaha. Anyways. I've read this over several times, enjoyed turning it around with the hands in my mind.
Hope you do well in the comp.
Hope you do well in the comp.
5th Nov 2017 8:04am
Your comment made my day! Haha! Good lines there, don't lose them :) I really appreciate what you said, so very glad you liked it!
5th Nov 2017 7:57am
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5th Nov 2017 3:20pm
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7th Nov 2017 4:24am
Just wow!!!! I would love to write nature poems like this, it was so beautiful :-)))))
thank you so much for sharing :-)
thank you so much for sharing :-)
7th Nov 2017 5:07am
