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those things I have to get through ..
and those things
that make
those things work
that I can't
explain
like doors
that open
automatically
freak
me out ..
Published 4th Nov 2017
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4th Nov 2017 00:23am
4th Nov 2017 00:35am
4th Nov 2017 2:25am
It's only locked doors that freak me out, real or metaphoric :-)
Big Like :-)))))
Big Like :-)))))
5th Nov 2017 9:22pm
Being in a room with no door freaks me out lol. Great write Paul.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
6th Nov 2017 4:57pm
eXcuse me, Sir Harry, but how did you get in-to a room "with no door",( or portal of some sort)?
8th Nov 2017 10:17pm
Haha...let's say the door was removed by powerful aholes Sir Daniel...bricked up after entry perhaps.
10th Nov 2017 6:02pm
6th Nov 2017 4:54pm
we've poured so much 'genius' into the convenience, toy, & weapon machineries----- i'magine puttin that much time & effort in lessening the pervasive, suffering that we only enhance (in the non-privileged among us via OUR self-indulgence..... makes the illusion-of-Me wanna k'ill me'self...........PS: superb.
