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4 Children in The Stream of Consciousness
Once upon a time
There was a very cute kitty
And there was a bat
And I hope there was a little panda
But about all those animals there was something midst of them all
And the mama cat had a cute baby so she borned her with her husband then they...
And there was a tiger
I wish there was a panda
The animals had a friendly father: GOD
Then their father sent them to have all of them commanded to have a baby but then the cat already had a baby and she was hoping and hoping for another one and then all the rest got another one too
But the tiger was missing one
I wish there was a panda
God didn't command them but asked them to have a baby, so then He created a new kind of animal called HUMAN
And then God made lots and lots of Humans and they have the precious animals to the humans to make them happy and love them so much
But the tiger lived out in the woods and he had no baby
I wish there was a panda and a bunny and a boat and God was in the forest dreaming about flowers and gold and a lot more tigers and there were many things so small and Elena and Elena shoes and Elena everything, that's all, THAT'S ALL and they all went swimming
(Each line was one child's contribution. It Starts with daughter aged 9, daughter aged 6, son aged 7 and daughter aged 3.)
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