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Re. i gave up sugar
Love the minimalism you've used to paint this picture
of the sweetness dripping from your honey.
High on love, no better stimuli on earth.
Nice job, quick and true.
of the sweetness dripping from your honey.
High on love, no better stimuli on earth.
Nice job, quick and true.
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Re: Re. i gave up sugar
you've surmised
it better
than the expression itself.
the high of love, indeed
no better stimuli
on earth.
the ink's
for the ones
close to my heart.
peer
depth of insight
wisdom
welcomed
open arms.
it better
than the expression itself.
the high of love, indeed
no better stimuli
on earth.
the ink's
for the ones
close to my heart.
peer
depth of insight
wisdom
welcomed
open arms.
Re. i gave up sugar
24th Oct 2017 9:03pm
Re: Re. i gave up sugar
25th Oct 2017 1:39pm
life
is but sweet
with loved ones
and peers
admirable.
welcome.
always
appreciated.
is but sweet
with loved ones
and peers
admirable.
welcome.
always
appreciated.
Re. i gave up sugar
Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 00:18am
Loved this one - made me smile.
Very sweet write ;)
Very sweet write ;)
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Re: Re. i gave up sugar
welcome
is the peer
and the review
both
appreciated
deeply.
smile
is an reward awesome .
is the peer
and the review
both
appreciated
deeply.
smile
is an reward awesome .
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
27th Oct 2017 3:27am
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Re: Re. i gave up sugar
29th Oct 2017 2:56am
yes!
exactly!
welcome
is the Artist
admired
and the
review!
both
appreciated
deeply!
exactly!
welcome
is the Artist
admired
and the
review!
both
appreciated
deeply!