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against all odds
life
Inspiration:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/285712-touch-and-go/
Published 21st Oct 2017
| Edited 22nd Oct 2017
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21st Oct 2017 10:38pm
21st Oct 2017 10:45pm
well..
true wisdom
poet
is the peer
for seeing
what's there
against all odds.
:-)
appreciation
beyond words.
true wisdom
poet
is the peer
for seeing
what's there
against all odds.
:-)
appreciation
beyond words.
22nd Oct 2017 3:05am
One word that describes eons, thus returning our thoughts of the beginning that allowed it to be penned here.
Deep is the poets ink.
The shortest RL ever to be captured, yet when opened contains more wonders, words, and thoughts that could ever be imagined by one mind.
Deep is the poets ink.
The shortest RL ever to be captured, yet when opened contains more wonders, words, and thoughts that could ever be imagined by one mind.
22nd Oct 2017 3:10am
wisdom
or rather more apt
would be The Vision
of the Peer/Poet
is the key here
for without the wisdom
and experience
there is no vision
no sight
the word above
merely a trigger.
in all honesty.
welcome
is the peer
the affection
the review.
all held
deeply close.
or rather more apt
would be The Vision
of the Peer/Poet
is the key here
for without the wisdom
and experience
there is no vision
no sight
the word above
merely a trigger.
in all honesty.
welcome
is the peer
the affection
the review.
all held
deeply close.
22nd Oct 2017 4:36pm
dearest poet
indeed it flourishes
no matter what
it prevails..
life..
so profound is this word..
thank you for enlightening me today..
~Raven
indeed it flourishes
no matter what
it prevails..
life..
so profound is this word..
thank you for enlightening me today..
~Raven
23rd Oct 2017 4:12pm
welcome
is the peer
the poet.
as mentioned above
the word above
is but
a trigger
the enlightenment
is within the peer
visit
review
both
appreciated
immensely.
is the peer
the poet.
as mentioned above
the word above
is but
a trigger
the enlightenment
is within the peer
visit
review
both
appreciated
immensely.
22nd Oct 2017 11:14pm
23rd Oct 2017 4:13pm
23rd Oct 2017 5:19am
