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PTSD Haikus 7.1
(i) Dreams
Awakened screaming
The night terrors of childhood
A dream infected
(ii) Visions
Asleep or awake
They press their weight down on you
Visions terrify
(iii) Anxiety
Still ringing my hands
I'm scared of what's coming next
Daily nightmares
(iv) Healing
This Christian healing
Just a vile laying on of hands
Inappropriate sex
(v) Sucker
Like a John Wayne film
I'm sucking out the poison
Why snakebit cocks
(vi) Blessed
In the name of God
Devil in a dog collar
Runs young boy orgies
(vii) Repeat
Evil sub conscious
A sick rapist of the mind
Repeat offender
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Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
Anonymous
15th Oct 2017 6:09pm
When the minutest of details - an action, a sound, a smell - can trigger the most horrifying remembrance...no reliving of an occurrence. That is the definition of hell...in my opinion. Such warm and fierce hugs for you, my friend
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Re: Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
16th Oct 2017 00:04am
we all have our own personal hell - it would be hell if it was a permanent state of mind - so it is just shit (lol) Huge Big Hugs :-)
Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
15th Oct 2017 7:09pm
These poems are so hard to read it hurts to even allow the pictures to enter my mind. Your experience was a living horror that angers me so much I want to do horrible things to everyone who abused you!
I get so mad that commenting on the high quality of these Haikus seems pointless. You have proven time and again you can take on the demons that haunt you! You're courage to talk about it is commendable David!!!
JJ
I get so mad that commenting on the high quality of these Haikus seems pointless. You have proven time and again you can take on the demons that haunt you! You're courage to talk about it is commendable David!!!
JJ
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Re: Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
16th Oct 2017 00:23am
sometime awareness only gets raised through poetry and talking and hopefully help is made easily available :-) thank you my friend :-)
Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
15th Oct 2017 7:55pm
David, mo chara chotha`imid....my heart hurts, and my very soul feels your pain and torment every time i read these postings! When even the slightest trigger factors can make daily life such an extremely difficult challenge for you, i simply cannot imagine how you manage to persevere! Yet.....you continue to prove, thru your poetry, that you are definitely a survivor!
I admire the enormous amount of inner-strength, and courage that you possess---not only in being able to survive the horrible abuse that you suffered, but in being to share. these accounts with us, as well!
I just wish i could gather you close... in a bizillion bunches of enormous, enfolding and caring HUGS!!
I admire the enormous amount of inner-strength, and courage that you possess---not only in being able to survive the horrible abuse that you suffered, but in being to share. these accounts with us, as well!
I just wish i could gather you close... in a bizillion bunches of enormous, enfolding and caring HUGS!!
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Re: Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
16th Oct 2017 00:32am
the support I get from you and others here makes life a lot easier and i am thankful for that :-) Huge Big Hugs :-)
Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
15th Oct 2017 10:00pm
These things never let us go, we just manage somehow. I admire your strength. Speak out for all those that suffer in silence.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Re: Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
16th Oct 2017 00:37am
we all survive how we can and all differently the most important thing we can do is survive :-) Thank you my friend :-)
Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
Anonymous
15th Oct 2017 10:57pm
David, you have a way with these haikus that kicks the crap out of any others I’ve read...such few words yet they have the impact of an atom bomb...your courage and determination are so admirable...heart aches again and again with each stanza and the impact of felt long after the last line is read...I tip my pen to you and I am so very sorry you ever had to be subjected to any of the horrors you have experienced.
Never ending warm fuzzies for you my friend...Super duper tight!!
Xoxo Taryn
Never ending warm fuzzies for you my friend...Super duper tight!!
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
16th Oct 2017 00:40am
I think personal experience makes the most powerful poetry - that is true for us all :-) thank you for your constant support - Huge HUGS :-)
Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
15th Oct 2017 11:41pm
It is no surprise this stems from a religious orientation- I boil inside with indignation! I don't know how you manage to express such atrocities so artistically... You've succinctly carved these realities into brutally impacting haiku's; your power of expression is commanding! Stay strong dear friend <3
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Re: Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
16th Oct 2017 00:47am
thank you so much your comments mean such a lot - these atrocities have been relived every day for 5 years that keeps them fresh and affects my levels of rage and injustice, this motivate these kind of writes. thank you again my friend :-)
Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
17th Oct 2017 00:20am
David, these are your niches - these power-packed punches to the guts, right hooks to the jaw, and reminders of a reality out there for many people.
This type of work is both enlightening and cathartic. Nuggets of wisdom that will be discovered repeatedly by those who pan for truth.
This type of work is both enlightening and cathartic. Nuggets of wisdom that will be discovered repeatedly by those who pan for truth.
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Re: Re. PTSD Haikus 7.1
17th Oct 2017 3:19am
thank you - that was a really big thing you said and I am touched by your comments - these are must write poems for me :-)