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Where We Begin
Visually stunning
evokes hungry greed..
Full shimmering fruit
with a sweet taste I need.
Lips helping to form
the sounds of my name...
Creating a yearning
I cannot contain.
A sensual wet
attracting me near...
Pulling me in deeper,
my want is so clear.
Curving a smile
inviting me in...
Innocent yet naughty
that's how it begins.
A craving to feel them
pressing with mine...
As I watch your tongue
slowly slide from behind.
Licking while glazing
the length of your smile..
Arousing my needs
with innocent style.
A glistening warmth
I've been yearning to know.
Delicious and lovely
I'm wanting them so.
I'm so intoxicated
with the view...
My mouth is watering
to lay lips on you.
Both knowing our kiss
will open a door...
My tongue wants to
savor each inch I explore.
Your lips are just the
first taste of the fruit...
The beginning of a night
full of pursuit.
evokes hungry greed..
Full shimmering fruit
with a sweet taste I need.
Lips helping to form
the sounds of my name...
Creating a yearning
I cannot contain.
A sensual wet
attracting me near...
Pulling me in deeper,
my want is so clear.
Curving a smile
inviting me in...
Innocent yet naughty
that's how it begins.
A craving to feel them
pressing with mine...
As I watch your tongue
slowly slide from behind.
Licking while glazing
the length of your smile..
Arousing my needs
with innocent style.
A glistening warmth
I've been yearning to know.
Delicious and lovely
I'm wanting them so.
I'm so intoxicated
with the view...
My mouth is watering
to lay lips on you.
Both knowing our kiss
will open a door...
My tongue wants to
savor each inch I explore.
Your lips are just the
first taste of the fruit...
The beginning of a night
full of pursuit.
Published 14th Oct 2017
| Edited 15th Oct 2017
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2017 4:50am
so a few lines peaked this gal..
"Licking while glazing
the length of your smile..
Arousing my needs
with innocent style."
~ a smile should always be there in knowing such a reception would be gifted *evil grins*...
*
"My mouth is watering
to lay lips on you. <~ truly loved this line
Both knowing our kiss
will open a door... <~ such magic in a kiss - so personal, one of the reasons I don't unless one is worthy
My tongue wants to
savor each inch I explore.
Your lips are just the
first taste of the fruit...
The beginning of a night
full of pursuit." <~ a night of pursuit...so much can be said for the cat and mouse chase, normally the cat toys with and then kills, hopefully this led to purrs and snuggles
xoxo Taryn
"Licking while glazing
the length of your smile..
Arousing my needs
with innocent style."
~ a smile should always be there in knowing such a reception would be gifted *evil grins*...
*
"My mouth is watering
to lay lips on you. <~ truly loved this line
Both knowing our kiss
will open a door... <~ such magic in a kiss - so personal, one of the reasons I don't unless one is worthy
My tongue wants to
savor each inch I explore.
Your lips are just the
first taste of the fruit...
The beginning of a night
full of pursuit." <~ a night of pursuit...so much can be said for the cat and mouse chase, normally the cat toys with and then kills, hopefully this led to purrs and snuggles
xoxo Taryn
I thank you Ms Taryn for the read and
your thoughtful comment as well
as the your wonderful help.
your thoughtful comment as well
as the your wonderful help.
Hello! I'm new here! I really liked your poem. It caught my attention in the first few words! my favorite was this:
"I'm so intoxicated
with the view...
My mouth is watering
to lay lips on you."
Very good!
"I'm so intoxicated
with the view...
My mouth is watering
to lay lips on you."
Very good!
16th Oct 2017 4:05pm
Thank you and welcome to DUP. I hope that you will feel welcome here. I look forward to reading you soon. I am certainly happy to know that your attention was grabbed by the first few lines
16th Oct 2017 4:37pm
I agree. The first lines invite you in. Also the ending phrases surely are the beginning of something.....
And everything in between just so sensual with just the right amount of sexy.
Thank you !
And everything in between just so sensual with just the right amount of sexy.
Thank you !
17th Oct 2017 5:45am
I would like to thank you for your wonderful comments and I am so very happy that you enjoyed
16th Oct 2017 10:30pm
17th Oct 2017 5:47am
I would argue the most sensual part of a woman’s body. Thank you both your comment and read my dear poetess.
17th Oct 2017 6:02am
17th Oct 2017 6:43am
