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Lost In Her Eyes
….the struggle
to resurrect,
to reconnect
the disheveled remnants
of the expanding man
leaving her bed and remembering the greyish hue of her flowering eye
everything cummin' full circle to an end
kissing her breast,
wanting her love again and again
….that sleepy-eyed walk
as she showed me to the door
lazily naked in the early morning light
holding on loosely,
a lingering kiss and caramel brown eyes whisper softly “......more”
...her plush derriere
sinks deeply into the expanse
of a soft-scented bed,
mingled with a fragrant vanilla
and a pinch
of the love we just made.....how it lingers
in my head
she wraps her legs tightly
around my waist,
face to face,
holding my hands and pulling me close
for what seems like hours
gazing into these dreaming eyes of mine
fan slowly spinning above us
having lost all track of time.....
“...just hold me and tell me you'll be here to love me today”
as we lay
in passionate, powerful stillness
in between alabaster thighs
she wraps herself
around my body
my pliant surrender still lingers
deep inside...
...fingers twisted up
inside her golden mane,
and the stare of her
emerald eyes driving me insane
“....Ebony and Ivory live together in perfect harmony”
remembering the moments,
this fiery, passionate flame
smoldering in the wetness of our spent sheets
tender kisses
as her eyes gently weep
“.....nothing has ever felt this good, nothing has ever felt so right”
the magic of colors,
you and I
cast upon a canvas of
soft pastels and jazzy-blue
all night
I don't want to leave
and she don't want me to go
…..moments in love
captured amidst
stares that I can't adequately describe,
a deeply kindred connection
reflected
in her eyes.....
Published 5th Oct 2017
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This is absolutely beautiful. What more should a world ask? For if it's collective souls, each and another, were to find such peace there would be no want to raise a hand in torment or frustration against a fellow traveler.
And to think I nearly missed this due to the "Extreme Content Warning". I find nothing extreme nor offensive within this write. I would suggest the removal of the warning.
May such peace and contentment accompany you on your journey.
A.T.
And to think I nearly missed this due to the "Extreme Content Warning". I find nothing extreme nor offensive within this write. I would suggest the removal of the warning.
May such peace and contentment accompany you on your journey.
A.T.
5th Oct 2017 1:23pm
Thank you A.T. for the heart felt comment. After posting this, I realized the oversight in listing this as "extreme" and wanted to change that label (but I simply didn't know how to do that here) : ) MMM
5th Oct 2017 2:17pm
Check out DU Help. It advises how to accomplish this, though I do not know what an URL means. Also, you must have inherited your poetic gift from the one who chose your name, for it is a beautiful one.
An apparent inconsistency in the colour of her eyes here - initially they are "caramel brown", then "emerald" later on in the session - or is one of the pairs his?
Could be rhymingly summed up:
Lost in Her Eyes
Held in Her Thighs
Could be rhymingly summed up:
Lost in Her Eyes
Held in Her Thighs
5th Oct 2017 1:20pm
No inconsistency at all. ; ) A well crafted device in theme. Look deeper at the allusion to "the eyes". How many do you actually see? If I say anymore, I will reveal the plot. 'Tis for the reader to discover : )
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6th Oct 2017 3:23am
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6th Oct 2017 10:10pm
Thank you baby 😊 Yes the eyes are the most pristine windows to the heart and soul......and let me say that yours are among the most beautiful I've ever seen. You are among the few that have read this that actually found the real meaning of this poem. Yep there is a hidden meaning here 😏
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
9th Oct 2017 3:33pm
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7th Oct 2017 5:03am
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7th Oct 2017 6:15am
Well my dear, you reply leaves me somewhat speechless. I am humbled and happy that you found this to be a pleasing and thought provoking read :-)
