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2nd Oct 2017 5:39pm
Haiku can be so poignant and intense in their frugal word count - well done again
19th Jan 2022 9:49am
God, those fucking friends of mine, I know them so well
What friends I hear you ask
That could make swear like so
Those two who have been
With me
For one reason or another
They've been part of my ecistance
My core supporters
My evil demons
My tormented twins
PAIN AND SUFFERING
I scream
These two
Who have bedevilled
Me all my fucking life
Begone I tell you
Begone now to hell
From where you were begotten
Begone
Please
Just just give me
One moment in time
Where peace can dwell in me
Great poem O, as always, love your writing
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏
What friends I hear you ask
That could make swear like so
Those two who have been
With me
For one reason or another
They've been part of my ecistance
My core supporters
My evil demons
My tormented twins
PAIN AND SUFFERING
I scream
These two
Who have bedevilled
Me all my fucking life
Begone I tell you
Begone now to hell
From where you were begotten
Begone
Please
Just just give me
One moment in time
Where peace can dwell in me
Great poem O, as always, love your writing
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏
