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Tom & a Mockingbird
Tom and a Mockingbird
There is a mockingbird that lands on his
Windowsill
Shrieks blood curling screams at Tom every
Morning
“Get up! Get up! she screams in layered pitch
It echoes in Tom’s
Head
So, one-day Tom starts mocking the mockingbird
Until
The irony is so thick, it drips into the mockingbirds
Cognizance
“Shut the fuck up! Shut the fuck up” she retorts
Then like a magnificent soaring B-52, she dives at
Poor Tom’s head
And just as sudden she flies off
Lands on spruce tree’s branch
One eye cockeyed
She begins to sing, like a sparrow
She sings to Tom of the coming of spring
Tom hears the words in his head-
And forgets what the beef was about in the first
Place-
There is a mockingbird that lands on his
Windowsill
Shrieks blood curling screams at Tom every
Morning
“Get up! Get up! she screams in layered pitch
It echoes in Tom’s
Head
So, one-day Tom starts mocking the mockingbird
Until
The irony is so thick, it drips into the mockingbirds
Cognizance
“Shut the fuck up! Shut the fuck up” she retorts
Then like a magnificent soaring B-52, she dives at
Poor Tom’s head
And just as sudden she flies off
Lands on spruce tree’s branch
One eye cockeyed
She begins to sing, like a sparrow
She sings to Tom of the coming of spring
Tom hears the words in his head-
And forgets what the beef was about in the first
Place-
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Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
29th Sep 2017 8:43pm
I liked this! I loved the humor in the birds "shut the fuck up" attitude! Lol! Nice write.
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Re: Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
29th Sep 2017 10:26pm
thank you- it was a toss up between a mockingbird, or Raven, and since Poe had the Raven covered...I went with my second favorite bird of annoyance -lol
Re: Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
29th Sep 2017 10:28pm
Re: Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
29th Sep 2017 10:29pm
oh for sure, you heard of those with an old soul..that be me...lol.. his short stories are amazing as well-
Re: Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
29th Sep 2017 10:33pm
I've always been fond of the raven. It was the first story of his I really knew... the black cat was pretty great too!
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29th Sep 2017 10:37pm
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Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
30th Sep 2017 7:32pm
Loved this my friend - only thing to make me laugh today - thank you for that :-)
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Re: Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
30th Sep 2017 7:38pm
got to do something then to make you laugh more often..I am having a totally fuck in the head ennui day..chicks problems..naturally thanks for the read man...
Re: Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
30th Sep 2017 7:42pm
sending you Celtic Scottish warrior vibes to deal with the shit take care of you! first and foremost :-)
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Re: Re. Tom & a Mockingbird
20th Feb 2019 3:13am
Heh :)
Well it entertained, nonetheless. I often write about birds, but in a more serious manner.
I thought this could be taken literally or figuratively, actually. The mockingbird could be symbolic of a person you love, but who gets on your nerves or annoys you at times. The " beautiful song" could be symbolic for your love for the person; despite the little annoyances, at the end of the day you still love them for the parts of them that you find beautiful. You're able see though to their beautiful soul.
Well it entertained, nonetheless. I often write about birds, but in a more serious manner.
I thought this could be taken literally or figuratively, actually. The mockingbird could be symbolic of a person you love, but who gets on your nerves or annoys you at times. The " beautiful song" could be symbolic for your love for the person; despite the little annoyances, at the end of the day you still love them for the parts of them that you find beautiful. You're able see though to their beautiful soul.
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13th Apr 2019 8:58pm