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Graveyard Dogs #1
Song of hearts
Song of hands
Song of dirt
Song of the laughing bell
Of mossed stone
And tombed visions
Song of the drowned
(a gurgling stream)
Song of the crow
Piercing nights bowers
Song of life
Song of bones
Song of hands
Song of dirt
Song of the laughing bell
Of mossed stone
And tombed visions
Song of the drowned
(a gurgling stream)
Song of the crow
Piercing nights bowers
Song of life
Song of bones
Published 27th Sep 2017
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29th Sep 2017 11:28pm
Beautiful. Brings a graveyard at dawn to my mind - beginnings and endings all in one place. I love it.
1st Oct 2017 1:26pm
Hey I'm glad you like it. I couldn't work out if it was dusk or dawn. One of those magic hours. Oh your poetry is wonderful. I'm going to have a closer look.
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 11:52pm
Made me think of a happy graveyard lol. I like it :)
1st Oct 2017 1:28pm
I liked this very much. Everything has a soul and thus a song if we listen. The world is an Orchestra.
One suggestion - night vs nights. However, if you're going to remain plural, then it should be possessive.
One suggestion - night vs nights. However, if you're going to remain plural, then it should be possessive.
1st Oct 2017 5:34pm
I automatically wrote 'nights.' But yes 'night' would work too. 'The world is an orchestra.' I love that. I'll take it with me.
1st Oct 2017 3:54pm
Had to find and enjoy this also after reading #2 first.
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1st Oct 2017 5:11pm
Thanks for the welcome! Yes, it looks quite interesting here. Oh and I appreciate your comments.
1st Oct 2017 5:33pm
