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On display
Secret, Secret, on the wall,
Picture Perfect standing tall.
Quiet Queries mumble all.
Sexy Strips, did he call?
Pierced Pecs, the animal!
Quick Queens in the hall.
Secrets, Secrets, on the wall,
People, places, in us all.
Quirky Qualms, do not fall.
Picture Perfect standing tall.
Quiet Queries mumble all.
Sexy Strips, did he call?
Pierced Pecs, the animal!
Quick Queens in the hall.
Secrets, Secrets, on the wall,
People, places, in us all.
Quirky Qualms, do not fall.
Published 21st Sep 2017
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21st Sep 2017 8:38pm
22nd Sep 2017 3:27am
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2017 9:46pm
Awesome!
23rd Sep 2017 3:39am
Anonymous
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25th Sep 2017 6:14am
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17th Nov 2017 9:43am
14th Jan 2018 8:38pm
14th Jan 2018 8:37pm
Alliteration and freeverse makes me melt
great job
well penned DomistLoral
keep'em coming.
it made me think of The Dead boys
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QOHOM1hVM-M
great job
well penned DomistLoral
keep'em coming.
it made me think of The Dead boys
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QOHOM1hVM-M
14th Jan 2018 8:49pm
Thank you, I tried really hard at the alliteration. At some points the poem is a bit forced, but by using it I am able to dig deeper and be more abstract. I will check the vid out.
14th Jan 2018 9:56pm
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