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Inevitable
What is a tree without branches
Tell me
A good branch on the family tree
You are
United we stand each branch fought against storms
United we stand each branch provided a shade when the sun was too hot and harsh on us
Reality is inevitable
Today I face reality
With a smile
Questions run through
My mind
Will i
Will I miss the moment
Will I miss days of you
Waking me up in the morning to pray
Will I miss the optimistic things
You say
Will I miss our never ending gist and the jokes we crack
My dreams you support
When I look around
You are there to clap
Now my heart is like a cup filled to the brim with joy
Let your marriage be blissful
Let it be beautiful
may God make you fruitful
Tell me
A good branch on the family tree
You are
United we stand each branch fought against storms
United we stand each branch provided a shade when the sun was too hot and harsh on us
Reality is inevitable
Today I face reality
With a smile
Questions run through
My mind
Will i
Will I miss the moment
Will I miss days of you
Waking me up in the morning to pray
Will I miss the optimistic things
You say
Will I miss our never ending gist and the jokes we crack
My dreams you support
When I look around
You are there to clap
Now my heart is like a cup filled to the brim with joy
Let your marriage be blissful
Let it be beautiful
may God make you fruitful
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Re. Inevitable
20th Sep 2017 2:39am
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20th Sep 2017 2:46am
Thanks cold_fusion I appreciate your warm Welcome. A poem to my sister who got married recently.
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20th Sep 2017 2:48am
Re. Inevitable
20th Sep 2017 2:51am
Such a heartfelt rendering. A wedding toast from a branch grown strong over time and ready to shade the newest sprouts of the family tree.
This is a great entry write.
Welcome to the Deep Under............ dear poet.
This is a great entry write.
Welcome to the Deep Under............ dear poet.
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20th Sep 2017 3:00am
Amorous_tryst Thanks alot A branch grown so strong over time. I think I love that.
Re. Inevitable
20th Sep 2017 4:51am
Welcome luciusRickji. I enjoyed reading your poem and look forward to more.
May I suggest that you delete the 'and' in the last line and put 'may God make you fruitful' on the next line...purely for flow 😊
May I suggest that you delete the 'and' in the last line and put 'may God make you fruitful' on the next line...purely for flow 😊
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20th Sep 2017 10:06pm
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2017 8:53pm
A beautiful read!
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15th Nov 2017 10:05pm
Re. Inevitable
23rd Sep 2017 10:23am
Life is thank-worthy Lucius. You thanked your sister for giving you support, and I want to thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts with me...., such a nice heart and words make our DUP society more beautiful....expect to read more and more....Love this and a RL add for me.....
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Inevitable
23rd Sep 2017 11:30am
Am happy when people get the message in my poem. I appreciate your precious time spent to comment on my piece. RoseJasmine
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23rd Sep 2017 11:32am
Am happy when people get the message in my poem. I appreciate your precious time spent to comment on my piece. RoseJasmine
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24th Sep 2017 10:42pm
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15th Nov 2017 10:12pm
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15th Nov 2017 10:00pm