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Re. Just a taste
18th Sep 2017 3:22pm
I love the simplicity of this poem. The little things that make life (or a few moments of it) a bliss (if, of course you can be all there and take in the totality of the moment. And your character seems to do it!)
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Re. Just a taste
Anonymous
18th Sep 2017 3:48pm
Perfect.

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Re. Just a taste
Ahhh...the simple pleasures of the scents and flavors of Autumn! My friend,Your final line made my tongue tingle with the anticipation...longing to savor the flavor of that tasty treat!
Closing my eyes.....and imagining!
Closing my eyes.....and imagining!
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Re. Just a taste
19th Sep 2017 00:29am
Re. Just a taste
20th Sep 2017 7:13am
Re. Just a taste
Anonymous
21st Sep 2017 5:10pm
JeM, youve stole my heart with your words that are absolutely 'transcending'
in a way that's undeniable.
i love how quietly you have trodden the paths to my senses.
in a way that's undeniable.
i love how quietly you have trodden the paths to my senses.

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Re. Just a taste
When I read this, I was in my room, suddenly I could smell of tincture...it's a miixture of herbs and wine...intoxicating....
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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Re. Just a taste
25th Sep 2017 10:46pm
JeJe, that's so lovely! This haiku services every sense and conjures up the liveliest of pictures. Autumn, honeyed air and a light-filled kitchen ...xoxo
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