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Transportation Haikus - inspired by David_MacLeod
Inspired by David_MacLeod's wonderful haikus:-)
(i) cars
Little cars glide by
Ants marching down the roadway
Mountain views delight
(ii) planes
Winged cylinders go
Sliding quickly down runways
Airplanes lifting off
(iii) trucks
Smog belching monsters
Eighteen wheelers rumble on
Swallowing highways
(iv) bikes
Two wheeled zephyrs fly
Dangerously around curves
Motorcycles hum
(v) trains
Metal giants run
Indurate tracks laying flat
Trains engulfed by night
(i) cars
Little cars glide by
Ants marching down the roadway
Mountain views delight
(ii) planes
Winged cylinders go
Sliding quickly down runways
Airplanes lifting off
(iii) trucks
Smog belching monsters
Eighteen wheelers rumble on
Swallowing highways
(iv) bikes
Two wheeled zephyrs fly
Dangerously around curves
Motorcycles hum
(v) trains
Metal giants run
Indurate tracks laying flat
Trains engulfed by night
Published 15th Sep 2017
| Edited 16th Sep 2017
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16th Sep 2017 10:48pm
see I told you you would be good at these - excellent stuff, I particularly like number(iii) but they are all good :-)
smashing Haikus :-)
smashing Haikus :-)
17th Sep 2017 00:19am
Anonymous
17th Sep 2017 3:47am
Well done Robert! I find these little buggers to be challenging...you have done a fine job here!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
17th Sep 2017 4:55am
Thank you very much, I find them to be very entertaining. I am so glad that David got me started on them.
Anonymous
18th Sep 2017 4:52pm
Great job! I have no gift for haikus and I'm always impressed by those who can make them work.
18th Sep 2017 7:44pm
