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Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
It was a newspaper hack
That chose to call me ‘Jack’
I object to the ‘Ripper’ description
Slicing precisely is my prescription
I love these dark and foggy streets
An abundance of female treats
In the darkness of night
Most folks take fright
They’ll keep their mouths shut
Role their eyes up and just tut
Her nightmare, not dreams
I muffle her screams
Repeated deliberate stabbing
Despite her struggle and grabbing
I remove organs and pieces
Avoiding urine and faeces
Mementos from those I’ve put to sleep
I decided a while ago to eat what I keep
It’s time now to end my murderous smirk
My experiment failed despite my good work
I have killed and gorged I’ve been well fed
But the souls of the dead, remain with the dead
Of to my next adventure, they’ll never catch me
If they did, they’d do nothing. I am royalty you see
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Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
8th Sep 2017 9:38am
HA! you wear your crown well David, all orange and spikey....
Really enjoyed this blood bath!
JJ
Really enjoyed this blood bath!
JJ
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Re: Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
10th Sep 2017 9:46pm
thank you so much - you can't beat a good slaughter (lol) glad you enjoyed :-)
Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
8th Sep 2017 1:16pm
Re: Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
10th Sep 2017 9:47pm
I like humorous and creepy - that sounds like a good title for a poem :-) so glad that you enjoyed it :-) Big Hugs :-)
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10th Sep 2017 10:50pm
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10th Sep 2017 10:52pm
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10th Sep 2017 10:53pm
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10th Sep 2017 10:57pm
Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
Anonymous
8th Sep 2017 1:48pm
It's a rather morbidly fascinating subject, isn't it? This is a really good telling of his tale. Best of luck in the comp!! Oodles of country mouse hugs! :)

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Re: Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
10th Sep 2017 9:49pm
I am convinced he was a member of the royal family :-) just saying :-) bundles of kilted hugs swapped for those country mouse hugs :-)
Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
Well now...this is an intriguing piece of the gruesome and gory...with just the right amount or your dark humorous twist! I have always found this legend to be a truly tantalizing tale, but i believe your version adds another compelling possibility....a sort of royal slayer turned a bit Hannibal Lecter, as such (lol)
A Stirring Scribe!
My very best to you in the comp, mo Chara! Hugs!!!
A Stirring Scribe!
My very best to you in the comp, mo Chara! Hugs!!!
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Re: Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
10th Sep 2017 9:51pm
thank you much I wrote what I believe to be true :-) so glad it got ya :-) Big Massive Hugs :-)
Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
jack was unappreciated in his time
ltm
you really excel at these dark writes, d... i find your humor and irreverence makes the horror more chilling.
best of luck in the comp
#transatlantichugs
ltm
you really excel at these dark writes, d... i find your humor and irreverence makes the horror more chilling.
best of luck in the comp
#transatlantichugs
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Re. Jack - - - - for the Murderous Intentions Comp
10th Sep 2017 9:52pm
thank you so, so much - I find the temptation to humour is often too much and I just gotta :-)
#scottishtartanbearhugs
#scottishtartanbearhugs