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Cri de coer
It's been so long since the rain came. I wonder
if I still know what it sounds like. And the thunder,
hammering the sky, heartbeat of monsters and Gods.
It leaves the quiet behind, as if it never existed.
A storm holds so much sorrow.
Like ardent souls, the desperate ebb and flow,
crashing into mountains and bruising a navre sky
where sylphs weep. My heart weeps there, too.
He remarks that I am part of the storm;
I am lush in the romance of it.
The billowing winds, the rain, the voice of drum,
are like a rapturous, criminal lover -
I have no desire to hide.
Adorned in silken widow's weeds,
I know that you must go, but in the heart of the storm
I cry the rain.
(Artwork unknown)
if I still know what it sounds like. And the thunder,
hammering the sky, heartbeat of monsters and Gods.
It leaves the quiet behind, as if it never existed.
A storm holds so much sorrow.
Like ardent souls, the desperate ebb and flow,
crashing into mountains and bruising a navre sky
where sylphs weep. My heart weeps there, too.
He remarks that I am part of the storm;
I am lush in the romance of it.
The billowing winds, the rain, the voice of drum,
are like a rapturous, criminal lover -
I have no desire to hide.
Adorned in silken widow's weeds,
I know that you must go, but in the heart of the storm
I cry the rain.
(Artwork unknown)
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26th Aug 2017 8:02am
she was made for storms, Kas;
someone there is, who cries down the rain -
so much passion in it, the beauty is a tempest...
someone there is, who cries down the rain -
so much passion in it, the beauty is a tempest...
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26th Aug 2017 9:11am
Storms are made of passion, passion of tears and in the heart of it all is a poem. Thank you, John, your comments are always beautiul...
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26th Aug 2017 8:44am
lovely Kasai you're beautiful
in the quiet stirrings & buildings of love
just like a passionate storm..
love Crim
in the quiet stirrings & buildings of love
just like a passionate storm..
love Crim
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26th Aug 2017 9:09am
Thank you so much, talented one, such a sweet thing to say. Glad you came to visit...
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26th Aug 2017 5:12pm
I feel your despair as if it where my own. I live the line about monsters and god. Great write.
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27th Aug 2017 9:13am
Monsters and gods, yes, makes a person feel small, in a sense. And to know that you felt it as I did is such a great compliment. Thank you much, I really enjoyed the feedback...
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26th Aug 2017 5:53pm
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27th Aug 2017 9:15am
It lives in many places, doesn't it? Sometimes it's just harder to find. Thank you, Tim...
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2017 6:43pm
In the storm we can release all with the shelter of its rage to protect us. I do so love a storm. So very beautiful, Kasai
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27th Aug 2017 9:20am
So very true, Ash, those storms are so profound in all their beautiful chaos, a much enjoyed experience. Thank you for the kind visit...
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26th Aug 2017 9:25pm
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2017 10:29pm
My Sweet Kasai, this one line stuck out to me...
"Adorned in silken widow's weeds"
~ Silk is most luxurious fabric, the most comfortable fabric, the most absorbent of fabrics (equal to wool), the best fabric for drape, the best fabric for color, capable of the greatest lustre, having the finest "hand"...just as your ink, my friend. Silk is also the strongest natural fibre and has moderate abrasion resistance...one may drape themselves, but wrapped in such a way, you have more strength than perhaps you know....
Much love to you
xoxo Taryn
"Adorned in silken widow's weeds"
~ Silk is most luxurious fabric, the most comfortable fabric, the most absorbent of fabrics (equal to wool), the best fabric for drape, the best fabric for color, capable of the greatest lustre, having the finest "hand"...just as your ink, my friend. Silk is also the strongest natural fibre and has moderate abrasion resistance...one may drape themselves, but wrapped in such a way, you have more strength than perhaps you know....
Much love to you
xoxo Taryn
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29th Aug 2017 6:25am
That is the most amazing thing to say, sweet lady, I absolutely adore it. You have such a way with words, the way your thoughts spill onto the page. I thank you so very much for such a lovely visit, hit me right there...
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27th Aug 2017 3:04am
This is really pretty, has a rain like feel, wish I could list to but my list is full...
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29th Aug 2017 7:05am
They fill up so fast, don't they? Thank you for coming to enjoy the rain, Poet, always nice to see you here...
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29th Aug 2017 7:13am
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2017 8:50am
exquisite!
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31st Aug 2017 9:01am
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2017 9:10am
wonderful writings, will read more eventually. :)
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31st Aug 2017 9:14am
Cool, thanks again, I'll do my best to return the favor. I tend to get behind, but I'll find my way to your pages eventually...