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Friday Feeling
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Unlike Robinson Crusoe
I don't yearn for rescue
Friends I find annoying;
At best I'm counting from
ten from their first syllable
But for my Man Friday;
He who makes me want to
see another set of prints
In the sand
I curtsy before thee
Unlike Robinson Crusoe
I don't yearn for rescue
Friends I find annoying;
At best I'm counting from
ten from their first syllable
But for my Man Friday;
He who makes me want to
see another set of prints
In the sand
I curtsy before thee
Published 25th Aug 2017
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Amazing how you can cram an entire story into so few well chosen words and metaphors.
I bow to your ability Teri
I bow to your ability Teri
25th Aug 2017 8:10am
25th Aug 2017 1:19pm
Such a Lady, Rose. 💃
I am no damsel
in distress
No one can save me
'cept myself.
I wrote that decades ago, and thought of it reading this verse.
I am no damsel
in distress
No one can save me
'cept myself.
I wrote that decades ago, and thought of it reading this verse.
25th Aug 2017 1:34pm
