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Scars
Well now the family knows
About all my scars
even the deep one,that never shows
of course they react in anger and fear
and Daddy delivers the biggest blow
yet he doesn't know the pain he causes
nor shall he ever know
for they all make me new scars
for forever the old ones shall go
About all my scars
even the deep one,that never shows
of course they react in anger and fear
and Daddy delivers the biggest blow
yet he doesn't know the pain he causes
nor shall he ever know
for they all make me new scars
for forever the old ones shall go
Published 8th Sep 2011
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8th Sep 2011 7:28pm
here we go again..get proper help for fucks sake...your becoming too cliche for me ..and it takes alot for a goth to say that!
8th Sep 2011 7:32pm
8th Sep 2011 7:37pm
the problem is here benji your not an emo your a wemo ...you wouldn't show them your scars if you were proper emo , so it goes to show that you are just an attention seeker
8th Sep 2011 7:40pm
i told them i cut so i could get help,they told me to show them? so no? I wanted to stop and needed help,which i now have thank you
8th Sep 2011 7:51pm
8th Sep 2011 7:53pm
why do u hate me??? *sniffles* hehehe and i know :D i just like pissin peoples off
8th Sep 2011 7:57pm
well carry on that way ..more people will hate you then you'll get all miserable for real..and kill yourself
8th Sep 2011 7:58pm
8th Sep 2011 8:03pm
im friends with emos and they dont cut or moan about their lives (well not to me anyway) people who are sucidal ain't open about it
8th Sep 2011 8:05pm
fine then i shall become a....MAILBOX >:D inside joke but im now a mailbox so u cant say shit
8th Sep 2011 8:09pm
8th Sep 2011 8:11pm
not a wemo >.< fuck of and quit being a bully and its not my joke,its mine and my friend's. Now go worship satan or masturbate with ur snake.
8th Sep 2011 8:18pm
i dont have a snake and while your cring about your life i'll be having endless mosh pits in hell im not being a bully your being a attention seeking wanker ..i tell it like it is!
8th Sep 2011 8:45pm
8th Sep 2011 8:48pm
8th Sep 2011 9:01pm
Anonymous
8th Sep 2011 9:12pm
do you really have to argue on the poems? you can email ya know. not tryin to piss anyone off but seriously?
Anonymous
8th Sep 2011 10:28pm
Seriously! I thought when I saw that this poem had 17 comments I actually thought this was a good popular piece...my bad! "laughs" Anyways...yea, that is what PM's are for!
Anonymous
9th Sep 2011 1:54am
i thought it well written good job
12th Sep 2011 7:03pm
seems like people are trying to be more dark than others, i thought this was really good. my brother was a cutter and it was not for attention so tell depressed girl to go fuck off and masterbate with some cissors. but this was a good poem.
16th Sep 2011 7:36pm
24th Sep 2011 10:53pm
That sounds like a very bad situation... But regardless of the inspiration for this, I like it. Wonderful poem
26th Sep 2011 1:34pm
This poem has quite a few errors. Capitalizaton, punctuation, the third line should say "show"
And "for they all make me new scars" sounds like the way an eight year old would speak.
And "for they all make me new scars" sounds like the way an eight year old would speak.
