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Devil Incarnate
Seducing you with kind words ...
The devil that she hides in an angel's wings
Lips that kiss with caring and loving words
Dress to be kind but harmful just the same
Heart that is full of jealousy and insecurities
Always envious of someone's good fortune
That's eating up what little good soul she has
Trying hard to be kind and good at all times
Meaning to care but ends up hurting a soul
They only seem to notice her naughty sides
That self-distraction is always easier to think.
In the process she harms the people that care,
The people she cares about without meaning to.
This crazy mind of hers thinks a lot.
Evil thoughts running around in her mind
Crashing down on her oftentimes.
She is the devils incarnate... don't trust her.
Published 22nd Aug 2017
| Edited 27th Aug 2017
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22nd Aug 2017 7:40am
We all have a devil to us. I know I do at least 😁. Wonderful poem, really enjoyed.
22nd Aug 2017 8:09am
Indeed we all have that in us, glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for reading and your kind words. Have a lovely day :)
23rd Aug 2017 11:45am
I liked it because it made me smile (even laugh a little inside). A deconstruction of human behavior going beyond the - by now - simplistic opposition between good and evil. Uncovering many aspects that form a self whose intentions are to project a good image without having a clear understanding of what good, or goodness is. And this because, good or goodness (as everything else) do not exist in themselves. And the poem hints, that we have to create it, define it and then choose it every single moment. And, this tends to be extremely hard to do. The poem's character, appears to want to be "good", but, it's a lot easier not to be. And, that's the comedy in human existence.
26th Aug 2017 9:31am
Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words, a reflective comment a pleasure to read. Glad it made you smile. Have a wonderful day :)
31st Aug 2017 10:01am
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27th Oct 2017 2:38am
"She is the devils incarnate... don't trust her."
i've known a few ladies like this in my time
they do know how to work their way inside..
fantastic write..
~Raven
i've known a few ladies like this in my time
they do know how to work their way inside..
fantastic write..
~Raven
28th Oct 2017 3:31pm
