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looks for him in stars
he will always be her sky
sunsets fill her up
jemac
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- Edited 20th Aug 2017 10:26pm
20th Aug 2017 8:27pm
He waits patiently  
for her to join him some day  
Stardusted carpet  💫✨
Ahavati
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24th Aug 2017 6:21am
Thank you so much Ahavati for the read and thoughtful comments.. always appreciated ox
jemac
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Anonymous
20th Aug 2017 11:19pm
Beautiful
Anonymous
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24th Aug 2017 6:22am
Thank you so much Ragnar for the read and beautiful comment  .. much appreciated
jemac
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21st Aug 2017 00:32am
There are so many wonderful interpretations of this
LobodeSanPedro
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24th Aug 2017 6:22am
Thank you so much LobodeSanPedro for the read and thoughtful comments ... much appreciated
jemac
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(14397816)
21st Aug 2017 2:15am
I love these, you are so gifted - Beautiful :-)
David_Macleod
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24th Aug 2017 6:23am
Thank you so much David for the read and beautiful comments  .. always appreciated
jemac
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21st Aug 2017 8:23am
look homeward, angel,
to see all that is beautiful...
JohnFeddeler
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24th Aug 2017 6:24am
Thank you so much JohnFeddeler for the read and thoughtful comments ... always appreciated
jemac
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3rd Dec 2019 9:53pm
Tight piece, the anticipation is like fire in the sky, tight
I_IS_ME
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