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Fragmented memories ( Malva )
Sighs.
Rosey cheeks.
Gentle whispers.
Soft kisses.
Slowly thrusting.
Sheets heating.
Sshh the bed is creaking.
Hearts bleeding.
Hallucinations distant.
Scared feelings.
Thrilling pleasure.
Lust busting.
Cruel passions of steel.
Spilling into one another.
Sighs moving to moans.
Don't let them come home.
Does anyone need to know?
Nails scratching.
Breathes catching.
Backs arching.
We collide.
Drift.
Float.
Fall.
Crash.
Burn.
Hold each other close in the darkness.
If someone were to ask me who was my first time. I'd smile. They'd call me a 'whore'. I'd go home. Kiss my lover on the lips and say:
"Good evening brother."
Rosey cheeks.
Gentle whispers.
Soft kisses.
Slowly thrusting.
Sheets heating.
Sshh the bed is creaking.
Hearts bleeding.
Hallucinations distant.
Scared feelings.
Thrilling pleasure.
Lust busting.
Cruel passions of steel.
Spilling into one another.
Sighs moving to moans.
Don't let them come home.
Does anyone need to know?
Nails scratching.
Breathes catching.
Backs arching.
We collide.
Drift.
Float.
Fall.
Crash.
Burn.
Hold each other close in the darkness.
If someone were to ask me who was my first time. I'd smile. They'd call me a 'whore'. I'd go home. Kiss my lover on the lips and say:
"Good evening brother."
Published 8th Sep 2011
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8th Sep 2011 2:04am
The imagery in your poem is very simple yet vivid all at once. I commend you for the invigorating read.
8th Sep 2011 2:09am
Why I thank you, glad the first comment wasn't explaining on how 'wrong' this poem is.
8th Sep 2011 4:48am
........very vivid with minimal words. The end catches your attention but I wouldn't say that you are wrong. You love who you love..........
8th Sep 2011 7:46pm
9th Sep 2011 11:58pm
I am jealous at your ability to build such an intense and vivid picture with only a few words at a time. Tho i never saw the ending coming the way it did. People may make of love what hey will until they now it themselves
