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Round 2
I don’t know how it started, we derailed and departed
Running through jungles, Nathan Drake “Uncharted”
Flying with “Sully” Tom Hanks couldn’t stop it
And now we hot again, “New Flame” incarnate
“A twilight goon”, injecting you with emotional monsoons
“By the light of the silvery moon”
Step into my red room and face your doom
To a theater near you it’s coming soon
Illuminating your gloom, get you higher than shrooms
Let me dig deep for your treasure, unlock every pleasure
I know it’s been forever, but it’ll be better when its wetter
I hesitated when I met her, let her go I could never
“Make it last forever {“.. Keith Sweat in the sweater.
Gave me that nookie sweet like cookies
Almost let it shook me, heart attack almost took me
Sat me down in armchairs while you’d dance, sookie sookie
Why’d I let you have it
“Now you see me” with the “magic …Mike”
Check…now let me feel you do that mic check...
Cause you my mate, today, tomorrow, always it’s no longer a debate
So I’ll assume, there is always room for a round two when it comes to me and you
Already chose now we just have to choose….
Published 18th Aug 2017
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19th Aug 2017 10:31am
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20th Aug 2017 3:07am
20th Aug 2017 3:15am
thank you, sometimes some pieces are harder to put together but this one jus flowed right out I had a blast writing it,
20th Aug 2017 3:20am
Your welcome, I honestly feel like lately I have so many ideas for my poetry but I either have a horrible case of writers block or just don't have the chance to write : / So I can understand how it can be hard to put some pieces together. But yeah I think this came out perfectly 👌🏽
21st Aug 2017 00:34am
smooth spillage..
on point imagery
enticing verbiage
tight metaphors
thorough vibe
from top to bottom
on point imagery
enticing verbiage
tight metaphors
thorough vibe
from top to bottom
21st Aug 2017 3:03am
The energy in this flow though!! I have to agree with the above..this was smooth..the movie/song quotes were slick..and the write itself relatable and of course...intriguingly satisfying...there indeed is always a room for round 2....:-)
25th Aug 2017 8:37am
Thanks, I appreciate your attention to the references, your compliments always touch the inner most parts of me
2nd Sep 2017 11:46pm
"Twilight Goon" injecting you with emotional monsoons, Fuck. Lol, well written! #SexAndEmotions
3rd Sep 2017 00:54am
thanks, a fellow poet has a poem entitled Twilight Goon and that jus resonated with me so strongly it inspired the line appreciate you reading :)
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