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Chaotic Compass
I fall in love with you more, and I fall in love with you less
Is this a test or a problem that needs to be addressed?
Who truly makes my heart beat outta my chest
I look to the North, South, East and West
Traveling the miles only doubles the stress
My mind a maze confused and insecure,
Highway congested I’m in need of a detour
To be sure, to ensure the balance of my mental temple
it could all be so simple, at least that’s how it sounds,
as my doubt gains the pounds, made me the joker of all clowns
I can see IT! Through bloody balloons no butterflies here only lowly cocoons
I’m so lost I need some direction, I need mind protection,
Survival of the fittest its natural selection
Pull out my compass, North, South, East, and West
Through the trails and the tests, of my cerebral conquest
Should I be through with you? Or keep it new with you?
Shrugging my shoulders, shaking head
Tossing and turning while I lay in bed
Hope I figure this out before we’re all dead
Is this a test or a problem that needs to be addressed?
Who truly makes my heart beat outta my chest
I look to the North, South, East and West
Traveling the miles only doubles the stress
My mind a maze confused and insecure,
Highway congested I’m in need of a detour
To be sure, to ensure the balance of my mental temple
it could all be so simple, at least that’s how it sounds,
as my doubt gains the pounds, made me the joker of all clowns
I can see IT! Through bloody balloons no butterflies here only lowly cocoons
I’m so lost I need some direction, I need mind protection,
Survival of the fittest its natural selection
Pull out my compass, North, South, East, and West
Through the trails and the tests, of my cerebral conquest
Should I be through with you? Or keep it new with you?
Shrugging my shoulders, shaking head
Tossing and turning while I lay in bed
Hope I figure this out before we’re all dead
Published 20th Sep 2017
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20th Sep 2017 10:50am
A question alot of us face about another...
Is she/he the one?? Or am I doomed to stay in a constant state of uncertainty?
Yup, I feel u here too bro!
Is she/he the one?? Or am I doomed to stay in a constant state of uncertainty?
Yup, I feel u here too bro!
20th Sep 2017 11:45am
Especially those juggling more than one situation it can definitely be chaotic Thanks for reading preciate it
20th Sep 2017 5:18pm
I really related to this. I pressure myself to find, "The one," and it never really works out. I loved this!
21st Sep 2017 3:09am
I think most of us struggle with figuring out how to love and who to love glad you could relate, thanks for reading..
21st Sep 2017 3:06am
It's hard when you have comfort and what your "used to" laid out in front of you, but your desires lurking all around playing a game of tug of war between heart and mind, sound and calm. I know the battle all too well. I hope whichever side you venture, that happiness finds you. 💙 Beautiful poem...loved it.
21st Sep 2017 3:12am
22nd Sep 2017 11:00am
that fork in the road syndrome eloquently and expertly conveyed..
a familiar journey indeed...
a familiar journey indeed...
22nd Sep 2017 3:11pm
I feel we all take the chaotic journey for love, and thus take similar paths and deal with very similar trials, appreciate you reading
Anonymous
28th Sep 2017 11:00am
Adore, no other words need assemblage to express how I feel
about this one.
Heart Striking
about this one.
Heart Striking
28th Sep 2017 6:38pm
28th Sep 2017 6:41pm
29th Sep 2017 4:09am
2nd Oct 2017 11:08pm
well u have got a lot of feed back
but remember
guys think more through their lower head
gals heart
so u need to use more of ur upper
get it ?
there is great deal of difference
between man and woman
men naturally show
and women want to...
by now u know
all the best
but remember
guys think more through their lower head
gals heart
so u need to use more of ur upper
get it ?
there is great deal of difference
between man and woman
men naturally show
and women want to...
by now u know
all the best
3rd Oct 2017 4:12am
yeah sometimes, but there are always exceptions, and emotions tend to effect everyone jus as Intensely guys jus usually have a more difficult time admitting it and letting it show, thanks for reading
18th Oct 2017 1:39am
Can really feel the thought and the cautious and wondering mind of a relationship... it's sweet...
Great write..!
Great write..!
18th Oct 2017 4:14am
Sometimes i feel if i got outta my own way, i could find my way..thanks for reading
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20th Nov 2018 10:08pm
thank you I believe dilemma comes so often for all of us its easy to relate to
