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A Happy Poem Just For You
I wish to write a happy poem just for you
Where rain drops kiss your nose
Trees sing to you quietly with the rustling of their leaves
Telling you of their secrets and the coming spring.
Where the shore rushes to meet your beautiful lavender soul
You taste of oranges and sweet zest
The world is your oyster
You are the master of your own destiny
I don't really know you it's just a wild guess.
Sailing your ship in calm waters
Your being has calmed me.
I wish to write a happy poem just for you
I'm sending you sweet karmic waves
Wishing you peace on this eve.
Where rain drops kiss your nose
Trees sing to you quietly with the rustling of their leaves
Telling you of their secrets and the coming spring.
Where the shore rushes to meet your beautiful lavender soul
You taste of oranges and sweet zest
The world is your oyster
You are the master of your own destiny
I don't really know you it's just a wild guess.
Sailing your ship in calm waters
Your being has calmed me.
I wish to write a happy poem just for you
I'm sending you sweet karmic waves
Wishing you peace on this eve.
Published 7th Sep 2011
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2011 6:39am
Now you know Crim, this is not normally my thing, but I really really like this, and got sucked in imediately and then the develish surprise when you said "I don`t really know you it's just a wild guess." caught me completely off guard. Its an absolute work of art it is!
Thanks for sharing it!
A
Thanks for sharing it!
A
7th Sep 2011 6:59am
I'm glad you liked it ty for the lovely and thoughtful comment..peace to you Crim
Anonymous
7th Sep 2011 6:45am
Masterful! I loved it, Crim. Thanks for writing it for me. Hahaha!! ^_^
7th Sep 2011 7:00am
Shaman you uplifted me with your beautiful poem and spirit..After my depressing poem..I thought you deserved something happy.. :) peace to you and ty Crim
Anonymous
7th Sep 2011 7:11pm
i love this perfect read to lift ones spirit!
7th Sep 2011 7:20pm
Thank you I wanted to write something happy glad you found it uplifting..peace Crim :)
9th Sep 2011 1:07am
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4th May 2016 00:04am
it is funny I picked this at random & it felt like you were talking to me :)
4th May 2016 2:59am
