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Seeker
I search for
Your face
Amongst the
Crowds, Streets
Alleys
I know there's
No hope, but
Every seeker
Is entitled
To their search
Your face
Amongst the
Crowds, Streets
Alleys
I know there's
No hope, but
Every seeker
Is entitled
To their search
Published 13th Aug 2017
| Edited 16th Aug 2017
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13th Aug 2017 2:08am
13th Aug 2017 2:30am
Anonymous
13th Aug 2017 2:30am
Hey 23.......you always impress me with your few words.....enjoyed....purple luv & hugs xo :)
13th Aug 2017 12:25pm
13th Aug 2017 10:47am
13th Aug 2017 1:58pm
I know you've only requested friendly feedback; however, this is such a GREAT little verse I couldn't resist.
Crowds, Streets ( <-- spaced and removed the comma after Streets, as the end of lines denotes a natural pause )
I know there[ 's ]
No hope[ , ] but
Every seeker
Is entitled
To their search
That's it.
Beautiful little verse.
Crowds, Streets ( <-- spaced and removed the comma after Streets, as the end of lines denotes a natural pause )
I know there[ 's ]
No hope[ , ] but
Every seeker
Is entitled
To their search
That's it.
Beautiful little verse.
13th Aug 2017 11:15pm
14th Aug 2017 2:34am
