Whole

i enjoy the lovely dreary wasteland of love picture you painted here.the pain seeps out from the edges and everywhere in between.well penned.

Thank you. I honestly battled with this poem, until I closed my eyes and imagined what my inner being/heart looked like during those moments that inspired this piece. Then it all tumbled out.

I feel all of the pain in this piece.  A broken love can be so excruciating and all consuming.  Your words bring forth the images of how you can be torn apart and left empty.  But your ending is so refreshing, so hopeful, to be your whole self again.

Thank you for your thoughts x wrote this after a huge fight... Oops. We made up after, but my wounded heart had already painted the outcome as reflected in this piece...

Sigh.